great story, lovin it, buy 8/10, character's feel slightly OOC, and the grammar isn't the best. I recommend getting a beta, which would help/alleviate with both these issues.

The “philosophical” line about changing the world was really dumb. Not a single person has ever meant that phrase literally. It’s alway about changing a state of affairs in the world usually a socio-political issue. If you really think everyone else is that stupid then perhaps you should stop thinking yourself better than others and start thinking on how to better .
I’m legitimately done with this strange Mary Sue/Gary Stu story. Also Qrow only started drinking in grief due to Summers death, is it smart, no. But perhaps if his sister acted like family for once and stuck around to help them through the maybe he’d be better.

I don’t really like the “poor me” Raven angle. the fact that everyone was afraid of her is a bit ridiculous.

I... don't think Arkos (Jaune x Pyrrha) would work In this story. Jane's worldview is different in this story, and I don't think it would work

Oh yang

six months old and speaking coherent words. I'm impressed jaune

Ah the play of words

Poor Summer

Here comes a mild case of brainwashing

good

"...adjust those facial features a bit and we're looking at a mini Taiyang..."

Anyone can look like anyone else if we "adjust their facial features", Qrow. Although, you're drunk, so brain farts are expected.

hope you return

Hans, get ze flamer

When will you continue with the story?

I enjoyed reading this story. Too bad most likely it's dead.