| Reviews for The Road to be a Pokemon Master: Johto Arc |
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Commander M2 chapter 1 . 7/11 After Silver's arrest, did Ash managed to get Silver's Feraligatr. If he gets Silver's Feraligatr and placed it on Professor Oak's Lab, Silver's Feraligatr could become Ash's Totodile's mentor. |
LiveMan chapter 72 . 6/11 hahahahaha... I laughed so hard when the Salvador asked ash if he got a harem and ash was like 'what's that?' lolllll |
LiveMan chapter 40 . 6/9 poor poliwhirl... |
LiveMan chapter 35 . 6/9 hahahaha. poor totodile needs to work on his stamina lol I burst out laughing at the part where they went toward the bushes |
LiveMan chapter 27 . 6/8 I actual cried... poor Brock |
LiveMan chapter 25 . 6/8 this is definitely the sweetest chapter yet! it had me grinning like an idiot the whole time! ugh my heart cant take too much more of this! |
LiveMan chapter 21 . 6/8 don't worry. I really enjoyed this chapter and can tell that you put in a lot of effort. |
LiveMan chapter 19 . 6/7 I actually expected serena to get totodile since it would fit in with her pokemon performances perfectly |
LiveMan chapter 7 . 6/7 awwww. I am so happy for brock even though he doesnt know it yet. the ship is under construction and things are looking bright! |
LiveMan chapter 4 . 6/6 I'm really liking this new oc character, Selena, got together with Ash. lol |
Octolock chapter 46 . 5/23 When did Cyndaquil learn to activate its flame at will? Just this chapter? Also, great job on the whole Ash challenging Silver thing. No way Ash will win in my opinion but I suppose I will see next chapter. |
Octolock chapter 45 . 5/23 I love Serena's short hair so much more as well to be honest. It suits her so much more. And her dad? Was so obvious especially considering her hair color as well as Grace's and her father's hair color. Plus who else in Kalos is that important? No one. Though you mentioned in the beginning of the first movie arc that Grace had to get away from Serena's father. You never specifically said he was dead though I get the feeling he's alive and Grace knows it. Or maybe Lysandre faked his death and made it look real. Even so, why lose your family when wanting to make a new world? |
Octolock chapter 43 . 5/23 At first, I thought Misty was going to stay completely but I am so glad she decided to go after the Johto journey was done. Finally, she's actually somewhat important and a bit awesome. I would say a lot awesome but Water Type Pokemon are one of my least favorite so yeah. Great chapter and that ending makes me wonder if Serena's ESP had to do with her first showcase. I remember Brock was concerned because everything was going too perfect but even if her ESP did affect it, the question is what did it do? I imagine psychic powers being very similar to aura in which you can communicate telepathically with your Pokémon and understand their feelings as well as view their memories but those have nothing to do with a showcase being 100% perfect. |
Octolock chapter 39 . 5/22 Weird seeing Archie, Shelly, and Maxie show up though you do say it's important. I loved the feud between them in Hoenn despite it being one of my least favorite regions and this is going to be interesting to see how they lose their friendship. |
Octolock chapter 34 . 5/21 The evolution felt super rushed. Togepi was just starting to battle about 5 or 6 chapters ago and Oak just told them to continue doing what they're doing. Now the Pokémon is evolved? I really didn't see it coming and I can't say that it was a good thing. Misty's Togepi evolving in the anime was special but here, it felt rushed. Congratulations on wanting to battle but you battled a Poliwag like one time and that's it. |