Reviews for Shrouded Veil
PurpleArrowhead chapter 3 . 3/15
uzume kind of reminds me of that one X-Men character who kills with a touch
PurpleArrowhead chapter 2 . 3/15
how about 'Veiled Opportunities' or the like for the title
yukicrewger2 chapter 6 . 8/23/2019
oops
Dean Heat chapter 6 . 7/15/2019
Damn fucking shame that this is dead.
spitfyre1 chapter 6 . 5/8/2019
Oh...lol not bad, wish there was more
Bondubras of Devoncroix chapter 6 . 3/27/2019
Okay. I'm liking this. Is there any more, or are we stuck with this evil cliffy?
-Maelstrom
AzureFlame12 chapter 6 . 2/13/2019
ok very interesting story so far and I hope you come back to it at some point
superdude50989 chapter 6 . 11/8/2018
Looking forward to more chapters
cain221 chapter 6 . 10/10/2018
Please tell me your not dropping this story. It's too damn awesome.
Gentrified chapter 1 . 8/7/2018
This is a good chapter and I enjoyed it, but,
homely:

British (of a place or surroundings) simple but cosy and comfortable, as in one's own home.
‘a modern hotel with a homely atmosphere’

1.1 Simple and unpretentious.
‘homely pleasures’

2North American (of a person) unattractive in appearance.

definition/homely
Note that this is an explicitly british usage.
ElfenbeinDaemon chapter 6 . 7/29/2018
I personally believe this is the most fascinating, hilarious, and wonderful fiction I have ever read on this site. it is bloody brilliant. And I sincerely hope you return to this. I will be eagerly awaiting your next chapter.
Ranmaleopard chapter 6 . 7/21/2018
This is just really awesome and I can't wait to see what happens next. Please continue
OmegaUltima chapter 6 . 7/16/2018
Another interesting story that seems like it will never be continued... :(
twisterblake2015 chapter 1 . 7/9/2018
good
foreal26 chapter 6 . 2/27/2018
Wow! Fantastic story. Fascinating setup. Would really like to see where this goes.
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