Really really great. Very enjoyable. You should come back to this for a one off chapter 10 years from now so we know what's happening.

God whyyyyy!
Why she had to ask so, so, so many questions?

Too many plots on unimportant characters

She's been too noisy and immature

Amber's so stupid and ignorant

Oh girl, such a deadweight

Hmm… interesting

These immature kids feel like 12 years old rather than 17, haha

And everyone is so willing to share their secrets with others,like Jaune. To be honest, It'll become less exciting for readers once a second character knows about main-character's secret.

Why on earth all the characters written by western authors are so…curious? Like, way too curious, always want to “find out” others' secrets, even it's none of their business or I'd say,quite rude.

I absolitely luv the fact that ur giving the teacherstheir due credit, specialy port and obelock, i luv these 2, especialy port the guys awesome. Id luv to listen to one of his storys its ome ofmy fantasys really

Honestly is Amber ever going to get off that stupid thinking? Even though it might not be a good thing I hooooooope someone bodies her and that smug bitch Salem

well not to sound lame but Aurora as in ykna northern lights since hes seeing in aura colour

Honestly I'm really confused. Why make jaune blind if his blindness doesn't contribute to the plot. Like how does he know who ruby is, only after one meeting, and gow did he know that she's friends with his sister. Like his blindness hasn't contributed at all and he seems to be able to do everything someone with sight can do with no explanation.

interesting.