Reviews for The Trapped Assassin
Jace chapter 23 . 7/22
Love the story; started reading and could not stop. Hope to see the finished product. Please don't take the trolls to heart. Regrettably, the Internet is full of them, if you had no sex they'd complain! I'm old enough to know that if a TV show, Comedian, or Book offends you, don't buy or patronize them. God, I hate the idiots who complain about other people's work when they are too lazy to do the work to produce a story. They'd rather belittle other people's efforts. Please keep up the good work, I look forward to much more. Ignore the Trolls Please. There are far too many people in the world who criticize other people's work, while not producing any of their own.
Feynman1968 chapter 29 . 7/23
This is such a great story. I mean, the sex scenes are great too and we’ll done, but the overall story is also so nice. This arc of them getting closer and Sarah finding herself is a great romantic build up. I’m really enjoying it. Thanks for continuing to share it with us. And screw the haters. There are lots of stories I have started and then realized it wasn’t for me and just stopped reading. No harm, no foul. But just so you know, rational people get it and screw the haters!
Guest chapter 29 . 7/20
Best story ever!
Ancientgamer chapter 29 . 7/14
What a story! What a chapter! Chuck and Sarah venting to each other and helping each other through the venting (?). Sarah finally starting to admit her feelings for Chuck to herself. She's getting some idea of how Chuck feels, too. Now if only she can open up enough to fully admit her feelings to herself and then to Chuck. Her emotions pouring out of her during their tryst and Chuck right there to help her and accept her and keep her safe. Beautiful, slow awakening. Like the sun rising over the horizon. Ignore the naysayers. This is a fantastic story. People need to look at the rating and read the author warnings at the top of chapters. If they ignore the warning signs and then complain to you, its their fault not yours. Keep going. Keep writing. We'll be to read what you write and love every word.
Guest chapter 29 . 7/12
Very much enjoying. Keep doing you! And please keep this story going.
chucksboxers chapter 29 . 7/12
This is great SSC! Don’t let the haters get you down. You write adult fiction and adults have sex. To think your writing is just about sex is naive though so please keep doing what you enjoy because many of us do get it and enjoy the hell out of it!
Deathzbreath chapter 29 . 7/11
Wonderfully wrote as always, thank you so much!
Lonny J chapter 29 . 7/10
If people can't enjoy the sex scenes and see past them to the deeper story then F 'em. You write it, I'll read it happily.
phathead01 chapter 29 . 7/9
WOW WOW WOW! THIS JUST KEEPS GETTING BETTER AND BETTER. INTIMATE, OPEN SARAH IS SO FUCKING HOT! THANK YOU FOR CONTINUING THIS STORY AND WRITING IT THE WAY YOU WANT TO.
FUCK THE SMALL MINDED ASS HATS WHO CAN'T HANDLE SEX SCENES. THEY NEED TO WAKE UP AND BE AN ADULT!
SORRY FOR ALL THE CAPS!
Vurich23 chapter 29 . 7/9
Great chapter as always! Can’t wait for more. Thank you so much for sharing it with us.
Guest chapter 29 . 7/8
what a breakthrough for Sarah! Chuck is so good for her & she is so good for Chuck, despite what she thought about deserving. Thank you for sharing, really looking forward to reading more :)
klipdoctor chapter 29 . 7/9
Fantastic chapter. Feel like the story really moved on a lot.
PierreLePilot chapter 29 . 7/9
I do like this story, my only complaint is that I wish it would move along a little faster,ie Sarah has to make a decision because Chucks holiday is over . He has to go back home ,how is she going to handle it,who asks who to go home with who? .
Your writing is so good ,a joy to follow your stories,you get into their heads so very well.
uplink2 chapter 29 . 7/8
Great chapter. I feel like we are getting close to the inevitable moment when the truth will finally come out. Its been a long slow glorious trip getting here but it seems like Sarah is approaching that tipping point and I can't wait.

Bravo!
baldcoder chapter 29 . 7/8
Super update! Thanks for sharing.
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