| Reviews for Jacks Pokemon Adventure |
|---|
   Golden Zero16 chapter 1 . 4/6/2016 Okay, you have a good idea, but it's real rushed. Slow down and try to add some detail |
| Reviews for Jacks Pokemon Adventure |
|---|
| Golden Zero16 chapter 1 . 4/6/2016 Okay, you have a good idea, but it's real rushed. Slow down and try to add some detail |
