Very cute story.

So cute! I love it!

AWWW- haha, this was so creative. I loved the little story you concocted. Very well described, and it made my heart warm. I'm seriously laughing right now because- Wolf, baring his fangs 'cuz he wants a little boy to be amused...aww, this was adorable.

This was really good! You captured the characters well, as well as provided interesting additional details - Marissa Meyer's world fascinated me ;) - instead of just dialog. I'm impressed by writers who have a good balance like that. Great job!

This is adooooorable! I love how Wolf deals with the children and the little girl - "I want all the food for myself. But here, have a tomato." Awww.