Eeeeee! Loved this! I love the idea of the hero having to work on the villains side :3 its unexpected in the hero's persona :D thanks so much for sharing this!

A absolutely phenomenal story. my heart was breaking for Gordon and his situation. I admit that my face was wet with tears several the epilogue was just perfect.

I am so excited to keep reading. You have me on the edge of my seat, and Gordon whump is hands-down my favorite. Thank you for your time and talent!

This is such a brilliant, nightmarish premise. I like it when villains have some nuance; it takes the story in such unexpected directions. Poor Gordon!

Nicely done.

XD SO F*N CUTE!

well done but I hate cliff hangers well done anyway x

I am pleasantly surprised as I finish reading this chapter, that this story was hurt/comfort, but not in the way I envisioned when I first started reading. Yes, the Tracy's all experience hurt and all need comfort (and if you know me then you know what I look for in these stories (wink wink), but the hurt and comfort here were for Kane. He hurt and was looking for something to fill a void and he chose his target, though seemingly for his abilities, it really was because the light that is our fave Tracy called to him. It was heartwarming to realize half way through the last few chapters that the hurt/comfort aspect of the story had really shown itself and it wasn't directed to my fave hurty/comforty Tracy. And I surprised myself by liking that! Go Figure! :D Now don't get me wrong. Please bring on the blood, fevers, hurts and bruises, please. All for Gordy! :D All the time! Wonderful job my dear author! wonderful work :D

Well, sister, I know it took a bit of work in the middle especially, but you finished. Congrats on writing your longest fanfic yet. )

I feel like one of the first things that happened once Gordon finally got home was him handing a certain thing to Brains and telling him to please disassemble this very carefully and very thoroughly.

Not sure what else to say-I'm still digesting it.

Oh, the chapter where he ran into his brothers was very, very sad. Almost made me tear up.

Good work overall!

I wonder if Kane's gonna find himself a less morally upright apprentice after a while...

I so totally called that Kane was gonna let Gordon go after knocking him out. To myself of course so no one will know of my triumph. ;-; BUT I CALLED IT!

In the beginning of this story I don't know why, but I didn't want to read it. I dunno why, maybe cause it was about Gordon who is know second on my favorite Tracy list (after John of course), but I stuck through because I just knew it would get better and it certainly did. Each chapter always made me feel and that is quite a good thing you've managed to do.

I can't wait to read your next story and *coughmaybeupdateyoucanrunbutyoucanthidecough* ;)

I will stand by your side from now on as well :3

I really enjoyed this its not often Gordon gets a story and i felt that this really made his character shine. I really liked Kane in the end! It was engaging and kept me wanting to read more! Thankyou for posting so quickly!

Yay, good for Kane letting Gordon go and being able to go home. One question though, the nanobots in the guys bodies? Did Kane just make them up to keep Gordon with him?

Really enjoyed this.

:-)

... I am speechless. Utterly speechless. Gordon should've just left him. Against his morals probably, but at least he's not back to where he started... unless... unless Kane did it for some ulterior reason...

Please update soon! like today! this is awesome!

I am totally enjoying this story. You are writing Gordon just as I envision him.

Looking forward to your next update.