Reviews for What Have I Done?
odalys-ortiz chapter 1 . 4/30/2009
Kirie has such a sad story. I think she is the one Fatal Frame character that I really like the most just from that. Great job with this story though
Remaining chapter 1 . 10/13/2007
Really great story! I loved it! The only thing is, Blinded isn't Kirie's mother. Her and Kirie performed the Demon Tag Ceremony together when they were both seven and Blinded was caught first, so she represented a Demon of Hell. Ten years later, they performed the Blinding Ritual to blind all the Demons of Hell. Just as she was going to be the Oni in Demon Tag, the Calamity occurred.

Never mind, though. It was a really great story! I loved it!
PapercutPerfect chapter 1 . 12/28/2004
*Blinks* Wow O.O That was incredibly powerful. *Squeals* I loved it!

Kirie is my favorite of the ghosts from both Fatal Frame's (or Project Zero's as I know them), her life was so terribly sad. And I just love her name too... useless information there for you.

Anywho, I loved it, it's definitely worthy to go on my favorites. Perhaps you could do another chapter about Kirie's thoughts when Miku and Mafuyu come to the mansion? I think that sounds pretty interesting? Or maybe you could do one about 'Mafuya'?

Hope you update!

Kickassangel
Gijinka Renamon chapter 1 . 4/2/2004
Wow . . . very powerful . . . me likey.
Crimson Snow chapter 1 . 11/24/2003
Dude, that was awesome!
Evil-Luna chapter 1 . 6/8/2003
Kirie is so col (lol) anyway great story I couldn't have done a better job myself. Isn't it fun to REALLY get into the characters? I just love.

Okay I sound stupid so I'll shut up

Kirie300
E. Griffin chapter 1 . 2/22/2003
Great fic! Fatal Frame is an awesome game, and I hope you write more fics about it!
WolfGirl too lazy to login chapter 1 . 1/19/2003
Awesome. I loved Fatal Frame and this is the first fic I've seen on it. There really should be more...
Aberlemno chapter 1 . 1/18/2003
I haven't got Fatal Frame (or Project Zero as it's called for European release) yet, but anyway, it looked like a great game. I don't know the characters but the writing in your fic is really good.