I really love it. Thank you so much for this lovely story. I wish that this would have happened in the show. Thank you xoxoxo

I loved the story! I read all nine chapters! Good work!

Reallt solid first bethyl fanfic. Just a few suggestions and only because I already think you're a good writer :-)
Next time I might spend longer developing their relationship but you had all the key elements that make Beth/daryl great.
Daryl was a bit talkative at the beginning of the story but you altered that as the story went on.
The only other tiny suggestion I have is that when writing characters inner thoughts, you use italics or something rather than speech quotations as it can be a bit jarring to read. I sometimes confused what they were thinking vs what they were actually saying. But this is a super minor style thing.
You write very hot love sequences! I swear I blushed at the table! And had to hide my phone from the waiter haha!
Congrats and kudos! Daryl especially is not an easy character to write with all his nuances

The makeup fit with what I think the show was trying to establish - which was Beth trying to explore the concept of being a woman in this unconventional world.

Hot damn! Was not expecting that scene with Beth (which I read at a restaurant so hope I didn't blush too overtly).
Like how you're setting up there interactions atm

i so hope for a sequel this was cute

Wonderful story. You did a really fine job here. Thumbs up!

Hot ending :) - Super chapter - Thumbs up!

Look forward for more!

Cute...love me a flustered Daryl Dixon

Cool chapter. Thumbs up!

lol! he fell asleep on top of her. :)

Super chapter. Really good. Thumbs up!

Amazing. Loved it. Thumbs up!

Loved it. Thumbs up!