Reviews for When I Look Into Your Eyes
eclecticfandomer chapter 2 . 5/8
Hey! I love this idea! I promise I really really really do! Its just... Super hard to read. Your grammar and punctuation is in the gutter... Just a little bit! I love the idea and im still super excited about the story! Heres the deal... Im a beta and I have a shit load of time on my hands. If you want someone to beta your past work id be happy to. Anyways drop me a line if you so choose.
P.S. I love the name Ryland. I love it!

~EC (eclecticfandomer)
Guest chapter 1 . 11/17/2019
I invested my whole weekend lost in this story. I cannot wait to continue with your other ones.
Guest chapter 1 . 11/17/2019
You're amazing!
Guest chapter 152 . 11/11/2019
Just amazing!
I wish to get a little bit more of Liam.
djcarnation chapter 65 . 12/24/2018
poor jessie i feel for clary ,i know of someone who went thru this the hardest thing a women or child can go thru,when someone u trusted hurts someone u love. in the worst way she will still be awile before she will b back to herself if will need all her families help and will need counselling so she knows it was not her will b awhile before she regains her self asteem got a rough road ahead of her.
Jencer chapter 94 . 8/6/2018
I can't message anymore...
I reached a limit...
ThePhoenixPrincess04 chapter 148 . 7/27/2018
I love this story so much. But these chapters just make we want to scream. This is the fifth time reading it and I’m crying right now. Even if you aren’t physically real, I miss you!
Hunterbow chapter 1 . 7/6/2018
Supernatural fans be like
Guest chapter 152 . 5/26/2018
Love it
Guest chapter 11 . 2/22/2018
honestly..i loved chris and clary together more than clace
AMFADAAMFAG chapter 82 . 2/12/2018
why doesn't jace like it when someone says penis?
AMFADAAMFAG chapter 57 . 2/11/2018
Jace got over that tube tying thing really quickly...
AMFADAAMFAG chapter 54 . 2/11/2018
I really liked the way you made their relationship evolve throughout the story. it was really unhealthy in the beginning and it got better!
AMFADAAMFAG chapter 53 . 2/11/2018
I mean, there marriage is unhealthy. It's built off lies, rude comments, secrets and no respect...
AMFADAAMFAG chapter 39 . 2/11/2018
so the part about privacy...if your leaving the country with someone's son, you tell them! It's not about privacy!
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