| Reviews for Reversi |
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Dhea30 chapter 4 . 7/25/2017 I love this. can't believe I never found a story plot such as this before. completely looking forward to what's going to happen |
Shinsoria chapter 4 . 2/9/2017 I love your rendition of DGM. The potrayal of characters are on point. Can't wait to read the next chapter. I'm suspecting this version of Allen possesses an Innocence too. |
asukakizuno.p4s chapter 4 . 9/28/2016 Okayyy so Lavi is noah of jugdement and is Lenalee will be the Dream? |
jy24 chapter 4 . 9/27/2016 This is a really serious chapter, and Lavi just confirmed that Allen is actually a strong Noah, he was just playing weak. I really can't wait to read the next chapter to see what will Allen do if he really feels wrong with killing humans. |
Blueberry chapter 3 . 9/21/2016 Ok, I am LOVING this! This is such a fun idea, and your writing isn't half bad. I'll be looking forward to the next chapters :) My advice would be to be careful with things like misgendering and sexual jokes since some people are sensitive to that stuff (you can totally still pull it off; just be *careful*); you might attract more readers and more certainly keep the ones you do have. Thank you for taking the time to write this; I am enjoying it. |
asukakizuno.p4s chapter 3 . 9/23/2016 This is a nice story. Seeing how the noah and exorcist exchange like that it's make me more curious for the upcoming chapter. Is there will be a pair in this story? |
SeleneAlice chapter 3 . 9/20/2016 please update this story soon |
Chikaniwa chapter 3 . 9/6/2016 This is a very interesting plot you've written, switching the characters sides. I'm very curious how you're planning to go about this. Reminds me of that phase at tumblr with a hypothetical exorcist Tyki. Though I'm wondering why you decided to use noah of illusion and chose not to use noah of wrath for Kanda? Overall, I hope you'll update this story! It's very different and in a good way. Moreover, I hope we'll get to know the details between Kanda's hate for Allen and they'll get a along a little better than where they are at the moment. |
jy24 chapter 3 . 9/3/2016 Finally updates! But why portrayed Allen as a weak Noah when he has Nea inside of him. Or does he not want the Earl to know his true abilities? The Noah seems so weak in this fanfic but I do hope that it will change in the future. And that Roron, he's just something made by the Earl wan't he? And the Black Order mistaken him as Innocence. I like how Tyki and Nick faked their disappearance like that and it seems like there will be a Poker Pair in the future so I really hope that there will be one. Can't wait to read the next chapter soon. And also, I really do hope that Allen had something that differentiate him from the rest of the Noah in terms of ability. He is the 14th Noah after all, the other half of the original Millennium Earl. |
FloraParade chapter 1 . 8/25/2016 I can't stop laughing the whole interaction between Cross and the twins. Especially, the part where Jasdero realized he and his twin gonna become exorcist, before getting knock out along with his twin. |
Failing Wings chapter 2 . 6/15/2016 They're are terrible delights, and the Noahs make the best worst Exorcists. They're so corrupt and insane. I love it! I wonder if Kanda took the "a voice in my head is telling me to kill you" seriously. |
13thReflection chapter 2 . 3/24/2016 I loooove this so far! It'd be so cool to see Allen wielding his sword in front of Kanda, with Kanda surprised as fuck. though I am curious about why the musician hates Kanda's noah so much... |
jy24 chapter 2 . 3/23/2016 Yes! Allen and Kanda are going to meet Tyki and Jasdevi! I'm thinking that the voice belongs the a new Noah, Noah of Wrath, maybe? Well, I can't wait for the next chapter. I do have one question though, were the Noahs older than they look or have they just reincarnated into those young teens? |
jy24 chapter 1 . 3/21/2016 Woah, this made me think that Allen doesn't even want to be with the Noah Clan, and so was Kanda. Is Neah going to appear in this fanfic? Is Allen going to join the Exorcist or create the 3rd side to kill the Earl and become the new patriarch himself? I really can't wait to read more about how Allen is going to do in this version of roles. |