Hah. That witch thing with Pyrrha made me chuckle. Especially the bit where they just gave up at the end. "Maybe a witch isn't such a bad thing." Gold. Just, rolling on the floor and laughing gold.

The thing with Coco was pretty neat too. Coco's one of my favorite RWBY girls aside from Pyrrha (undisputed favorite without question), so it was neat to see what she was up to. Good stuff, I enjoyed reading it.

my curiosity is now driven, how far are you gonna go with alternate endings.

but I have greatly enjoyed the story throughout it's go.

this/..is intersting!

This is the end? Sadness, but sort of appropriate. I assume that if Pyrrha were to break the Grimm mask she'll be returned to normal? Aura, Semblance and all? And I feel for Neo, though I admire that her love for Jaune seemed to overcome her need for revenge. Kinda bummed we don't see who Jaune chooses in the end, though I suppose Pyrrha and Neo would have to wait for a long while since Cinder said she'll never let RNJR find her, and she effectively left Salem anyway so eh. But hey, this was a pleasure to read sir, if you make any more Arkos or RWBY fanfics in the future I will definitely swing by to give them a look-see.

Cheers, and until we meet again good sir.

If you did a humorous story based off of the alternate ending the. I would definitely add you to my favorite authors list.

Of Course I Ship Arkos Hard.. But As It Is.. Golden Ice Cream Is My OTP For This Story.

Liking he story still. I wonder if they slept together and if so hen will Neo end up pregnant. Because that would be an interesting twist down the line.

Cripes. He seems really stuck between Pyrrha and Neo right now. And Cinder's not gonna be particularly thrilled when she finds out that he's going on a witch hunt with Ruby for her. Seems like the fic is coming to its climax, and I imagine that he's going to make his choice after he comes back from his journey with Ruby, perhaps. Either that or he's going to make Cinder meet with Ruby and circumvent the whole thing. But hey, my heart goes out to Pyrrha and Neo, though I do hope that Pyrrha wins out in the end. Until next time dude, keep up the awesome work!

Excellent story so far. Very grateful for you taking the time to write this. Thanks!

Once again I'm loving this story. I'm hoping in the end that Jaune, Neo, Pyrrha, and Cinder get together and have a happy ending even with all the drama I'm sure is to come.

Interesting Start, Looking Forward To Reading More :)

Wow. This was... actually really deep. At least, it felt so to me. Wow. I'm actually stunned that Cinder would do something like that, even if it was in her own self-interest. If she turns out to be like that in canon I might come to like her one day. Maybe. Don't count on it, haha. But I am deeply impressed with Cinder in your fic, and though I'm still rooting for Pyrrha all the way I at least think that Cinder has her fair chance now too. Until next time sir, this was really great to read.

This story is interesting. The balance you display with jaune's interaction between the three is very well done and also refreshing.

Wow. That was a surprisingly emotional chapter, damn. And it looks like Silent Knight is pulling ahead, hahaha. But in all seriousness, I'm glad that Jaune isn't viewing the world in black and white, and that he's putting his faith in Neo since he sees her trying so hard to change herself. Though of course that's typical Cinder to try and do something underhanded like that, I feel like she might be out of the running by default if she can't stop doing that. But wow, this was an incredibly fun and interesting chapter to read, I liked it a lot dude. Cheers!

You are really good at this. I love this story and am looking forward to more.