Reviews for An Explosive Touch
Le055Li0n chapter 9 . 5/7
Honestly curious to where this is going.
Chisaki Kouu chapter 1 . 1/2
Chapter 1: Man, that's so boring~ I wanted him to be like Killer Queen from jojo, just using the explosive seal as his main fighting ability all the time, and not just in life death situations. Whatever, I'll see this to the end.
Monster King chapter 9 . 11/21/2018
Please continue it soon it was good
TheBeauty chapter 9 . 11/18/2018
It's a shame that this story is not continued :(
Ash0011 chapter 9 . 9/30/2018
hmm, be interesting to see where this goes
ELEMENTKING5 chapter 9 . 8/30/2018
WILL THERE BE A NEW CHAPTER?
Afaaf chapter 9 . 4/9/2018
aw man! why is this great story not updated? Sucks cos this is awesome sealing plot
00 no one important 00 chapter 9 . 3/30/2018
You know there aren't many Fūinjutsu and seal master naruto without changing naruto's character as whole. Fics that deal with this either make naruto's character very intelligent and no nonsense type and bashing left and right like every thing that happens to him is intentional done to cause him pain and suffering.
Really speaking (or typing...) I totally like your style and story telling style. It is refreshing to have a naruto who is the same 'gullible kindhearted never giving up idiot' (naruto in one line) with a bit of fuinjutsu mixed up.
Please keep the focus on your story and your world building (I mean fuin, nin, gen jutsu mechanics- what?, why? and how? and also the general world building as a whole.) and not on romance and opposite boys and girls as love interest, One of the many reasons I really like the actual series is because it kept the romance part out of the story but used the love, camaraderie and other such concepts to drive the story forward without becoming headache (excessive love and friendship becomes frustrating as well its not the case here though).
Please teach naruto sealing art and sometime in due course his father's hirashin as well(not now but down the line with Jiraya or such). Keep his natural fighting style and add fuinjutsu into the mix.
Please don't bash anybody unnecessarily and make it a (epic length preferably) long fic with bigger chapters Take your time in b/w uploading chapters but don't discontinue with the story. It's a GREAT story, KEEP UP YOUR GOOD WORK
Guest chapter 9 . 10/1/2017
Love from a dumb phone
meshou storm chapter 9 . 9/29/2017
Aw, i was so sad when I realized I had reached the end. I love this story so far and hope you continue it.
TheOlympus chapter 1 . 9/26/2017
I can smell potential on this story only just read 2 chapter and I hope you not stop until you finished it.
Shizuka-naru Goketsu chapter 9 . 9/24/2017
... I foresee Deidara wondering if he's got a little brother because of this.
Soulhope The Wolf chapter 9 . 9/18/2017
great fic so far. i see a sleepless night for naruto. Keep up the good work.
Soulhope The Wolf chapter 5 . 9/16/2017
Hmm i would love to see Iruka end up with a date with Anko in this, i like the idea of these two hooking up for some odd reason.
Thou shalt not fear chapter 9 . 9/12/2017
This story started a bit shaky with all the odd situations that have occurred, for example, Iruka's insistence of secrecy regarding Naruto's ability, which initially made me doubt if this story was meant for me; however, as the story progressed, so did the narrative of the story. While there are still some oddities that could be discovered on the plot (mainly surrounding character personalities), major improvements could be observed as well. This is very true with this chapter whereas an in depth analysis of how the characters' minds work was provided. Good job!
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