Good work, I can't say it was amazing read, but I like your point of view when you created this fic. To be honest, your fic lack drama, too bland, and sometimes cliche, but I still read it to the end because it's interesting.

Loved it soo much
Never knew iroha route could be this beautiful

Aaaa! A spin-off fic with the OC please!

as someone that sees Iroha as best girl, this is such a sweet fic, even though I was expecting a lot of drama, in the end, it is satisfying to see a Hachi x Iroha fic go well, even though sometimes they talk and cheesy, it doesn't really bother me that much. I'll come back here someday, it was a wonderful read.

Thank you author, know that your novel literally make me quite happy(sad a little that i find this novel this late). Even though it has been 3 years since last update i hope that you update soon.
On side note, try to be positive you novel is must read thing for iroha fans. Normally you would have more than 1k follows. I think it is low because your story doesn't cross 100k words. Try to make up it anwering reviews(like most of authors).
Overall it is fun.

For new reader,
must read fic, i promise it will be enjoyble journey.

Wow. What a journey.

3rd time rereading this and I still fail to handle the fluff and the sweetness.

It's a nice story, I didn't think it was boring, but I think you should synthesize the next chapters, if you dare to make them

smh, saizeria has good food yes, affordable price yes, the portion is a big let downat least theres the unlimited drink bar tho

Despite the lack of drama, this was still an enjoyable read. thank you :)

Please don't say that your stories are boring or self-deprecating of your fantasies! They're so great and enjoyable to read, I've gotten all soft from reading this and I'm starting to want the genuine thing too!
It honestly felt so refreshing to see so much fluff in this story! I'm writing this as I'm reading the last chapter and it has been a great pleasure reading this!
Thank you!

well, that wwas a nice interaction, though I really feel as thoguh Hachiman is courting trouble by not telling his parents

I feel that the "living alone" condition is probably something the will be coming up later

It’s still good.

I don't know what happened, but your writing dramatically improved in this last chapter. The conversation between them, and their interaction with each other actually felt like people talking, and not robotic/ emotionless.

To be blunt, i was all set to comment on how this story was pretty damn ironic, as with how phony all the dialogue and interactions felt, the was very little in the realm of genuine. However, with that last chapter, it's clear something changed in your mindset on how to write.

Good step in the right direction, too bad it only happened in the last chapter. Hope whatever changed sticks with you for whatever you write next.