Jesus christ this is so sweet. Sadly I grew up with this movie, so the best thing for me to do is disassociate fanfics with the movie, but this one was so goddamn hard. I fucking loved it. Keep up the good work.

SEXY

Cool

Omg the last part is THE BEST part

HOLY SHIT! That was absolutely amazing! So much detail, so much of everything it takes to get someone wt or hard

Because one review just isn't enough ;)

Its so good! Thank you very much

That was awesome keep it up.

Nice.

This was so sexy, will jerk again to thid

i jerked so hard. hott. 10/10. would read nick fucking judy again..

Prime story 10/10 jerked my dingle real good. Thanks so much I'm gonna slit my wrists now

While I enjoy this story very much, I find it strange that Chief Bogo did not even have the courtesy to be there with Nick and be the one to inform him about Judy and the case and even pay a ridiculous sum to Finnick to do the job for him. Finnick comes off heartless to make Nick pay to see Judy. I can tell you wrote it that way for humor, and it kind of works as intended, but that part of Bogo's and Finnick's characterization comes off more cynical than you might have intended.

Nice

I have just found and read this story and I think it is awesome. Good job with the writing.