This story screams for a rewrite, as you've made the same mistake so many other Saku/Naru writers make. You absolutely rushed Naruto forgiveness of Sakura. I'm not saying he shouldn't forgive her, but God at least make her work to regain his trust and love. Was hoping for more when I saw this story, but now I see it's the usual Sakura pisses on Naruto most if his life, realizes her mistake, and the next time she sees Naruto he forgives her practically immediately. Showing he has no dignity, no self-respect, and no self-esteem for himself when it comes to Sakura. And that just makes Naruto look pathetic.

I lost count how many times I have Hiraishin as neon bulb technique.
Sometimes disappear in yellow flash, sometimes red, orange, hmm maybe next rainbow color?.

I hope update soon

they all cant he anbu captain dumbass

I'm not the first one to point out the passion of a character's highly immature in juvenile you probably a very decent brighter this I have no doubt maybe it's about time you grow up and learn how to write without passionate character I find a fanfiction Vitus to do that a compensate for their own failures in life but you're a better writer than this so I not be surprised you can write something better good luck on your future fanfiction endeavor this is called constructive criticism if you don't like it then I'm sorry

who ever wrote this shit likes bitches a good for you

fuxking sakura fanboi

It’s a pretty decent story, bit of a different one for me because this is my first fic I’ve read where naruto bashes Sakura. I hope it doesn’t for long, but I think it’s pretty good so far. Keep up the good work.

The bashing of Sakura by Naruto is getting old. So, what Sakura foolishly thought she was in love with another man and found out it wasn't real. That's life it doesn't make her evil. It doesn't excuse Naruto for his treatment of her. If he truly loved Sakura he would have wanted her to be happy. He would understand she was young and made a mistake and welcomed her back. It gets old seeing female characters bashed and treated like dirt only then to be accepted by the one they love. Maybe I'm just grown up enough to realize that's not acceptable and I will not be reading this story any longer. I wish you well with your writing and in the future if you write a Sakura/Naruto one where he's not a wounded, antagonistic but I will be more than happy to read it.

I love NaruSaku, I think they could've had something great if Kishi hadn't gone with NH. I just hate how in alot of Naruto stories they always make Sakura the bad guy. Either she cheats on him or chooses her first love and then tries to win Naruto back, only to have Naruto be a major dick to her, and everyone resent her, but c'mon Tsunade thought of Sakura as a daughter she would never treat Sakura that way. It's kinda weird how alot of guys want her to suffer for choosing Sasuke when in reality Kishimoto is the one who wrote it that way, Naruto was never meant to be with Sakura and Sakura was never meant to be with Naruto, at least in the anime. Sakura is not a cheater, she's loyal to a fault. Sakura is actually a compassionate character who made a lot of mistakes but the anime makes her into a bitch for the sake of comedy, well at least in shippuden. The point is can't someone write a story where they don't basically shit on a character for the sake of another. Naruto is my favorite character and I want him to be happy but I know he would never treat Sakura badly for loving someone else. That's why I like ff for the non-canon pairings but there are so few NS stories these days that let Naruto and Sakura be happy together. Instead they always have a bone to pick with Sakura first and then once they make her suffer or have Naruto screw all these other women do they let NS be endgame or have Sakura as his plaything, I guess it's time to move on from the Naruto stories because all the bashing on Sakura is already getting old, probably because I'm older now too. Anyway, good luck on your story.

Wah. Narusaku weyo?! Please do finish this

awesome chapter man, keep up the good work

So happy for this new chapter! Hana took her frustrations on the spot she wanted, which was sakura hahaha!
Also poor sakura for having to have to depend on naruto for little things, she feels useless again. And I get that there will be more bashing of naruto to sakura, it still feels like naruto wants her to suffer a bit more for all the things she did in the past. So I'm expecting sakura crying her eyeballs out in the near future :'(. Im so so excited to see what comes next, hopefully don't have to have too long for it. Either way, thank you so so much for sharing this story with us! I really really appreciate it!

Well that was interesting poor Hana but in a way she never stood a chance she probably did that deliberately so Sakura would come off as weak but maybe not who knows I can't wait for more though it's an interesting story I wonder if anything awkward will happen like people flirting with Naruto and Sakura and the other getting jealous oh well I'll find out whenever the next chapters up

good stuff