Very good story. A different angle explored.

Beautiful. I love it!

That. Was. Incredible. This shows how the Wayne's and their double identities can be perceived, and absolutely expertly, mind you. I loved this. I will be sure to check out any other stories you may have!

Great story. I loved your perspective on everything surrounding the Wayne family. Keep writing!
Blessings,
Sophia the Scribe

This is a very interesting perspective. Certainly a billionaire playboy adopting multiple children under tragic circumstances would be fuel for tons of speculation in the media. It's good to know Tim can cope with it in the end because there's nothing he can do to control the press so he may as well get used to it.

Good look at an aspect of the characters that isn't well explored

This was great! I liked the repetition. I think you showed us the center of the character's personalities very well.

This is so perfect. A

Yep, I feel pain. In my heart. Because of this horribly beautiful piece. Bruce, Dick and Tim were made for the cameras while darling Jason is too stubborn and grumpy and oh god it hurts. Wonderfully written!

This is so damn good!

This was excellent.

Holy crap it's perfect. Did you plan that all out first because it is amazing! I love how it's so descriptive and how you made one of the first sentences of your fic to also be it's last. Write on!

This was amazingly done, I especially loved that repitition you used in your story :DDD

Nicely done.