pwnutbutter your really stupid for not noticing then

Another retarded author making a another suitstain story of nick dying and judy leaving unharmed. Autistic judy fans like you makes me want to kms

Thanks for a super long chapter to complete the story! Your writing has definitely improved, and I'm glad you returned to finish the story. Don't let the negative reviews discourage you, I don't know what they're trying to accomplish, but I personally look forward to more of your work if/when you try your hand at something new!

Chapter 7: your life is uncool, you stupid retard.
Also, all of these asshole retards who review this are praising Judy being hero, while Nick is always in her shadow, taking the abuses. Delete this if your not gonna continue, you retarded shitstain

You must make another chapter so how it ends judy is a bad guy nick is dead or judy saved nick and become the two heroes of the town? You gotta tell us that one dude! Or this story is uncool!

Hey, I think that the story is really good. But I do want to know where the rest of it is. I see that people have reviewed the rest of the story, but it only shows seven chapters for me

Hello I am and amatuer writer...

if you don't mind,i may steal your scenes.

your name will be mentioned.

Hey man I'll just like to say that you have a career in writing books I always wondered about the original zootopia story and thanks to you now I know keep up the good work you're doing great you should make a sequel I loved how you put mayor Swinton in it thanks you're the best

Please Furry, do the whole world a favor and fuck off.

to be 100% honest... ending wasn't too bad. it ended like the real movie. Judy broke the city, then they came back found the real bad guy and poof city fixed. ending was not horrible
story was interesting enjoyed it for the most part only part that peeved me was when Judy simply overlooked the high levels of corruption, looked past the fact that swineton had her men try to kill her multiple times, and raided kozlof's restaurant and firing on innocent civilians with live ammunition... all because she was offered a promotion and found out nick was doing something illegal that shouldn't be a crime anyway.

Brilliant. Has a mature take on the entire story. I liked this more than the movie. Every chapter is well written and thought out. Having seen all of the concept art from the original Zootopia treatment, this fan fiction fits into that setting perfectly. Well done!

I can wait, good material doesn't always come when you want it to.

No problem, PC issues will always occur at the most inopportune moments for the person wo own said computer. Like the time my PC's mother board went when I had a research paper for a University class due. Lost essentially an entire semester's worth of work.
So I feel your pain. But don't worry, take all the time you need to get your work to a point that satisfies you. We as readers can't really make demands on how a story comes out, we are simply on a ride into the world as created by the author.
So take your time, and don't feel pressured by anyone to "hurry" your story.

Boom, It's fine! I'll be patient.

I really liked the story. The ending doesn't fit well though. So i'll still be waiting for you to update! :D