This story goes from bad, to worse, to terrible, to trash, to train wreck, to disaster of epic proportions very fast and you should stop writing and reconsider your life up to now.

nice story, keep up the good work.

This is not so much misunderstandings, rather the evil plotting of Eobard Thawne.
I wonder how that's going to pan out, when they discover Harrison Wells is really a villain?
And this version of Lois seems more like the comics and cartoon version than the movie version. The one that thinks she can do whatever she wants because she's got the ultimate bodyguard/boyfriend watching her back. Like she doesn't care about the consequences.
Those kinds of characters are the most frustrating to me.
You try and protect them, but they just don't have common sense or a sense of self-preservation.
And poor Barry. He's not making super-friends so well, is he?
Though, this does give me an idea for something.
Thanks.
Write on.

That cliffhanger... Other then that really engaging chapter here. That I hate magic line was too good haha.

You are blowing my mind, and this is just the origin story! Please keep going!

Amazing chapter. I really like Peter and Tess. That bond that they have is awesome. Can't wait to read the next chapter. I wonder why Team Flash captured the twins. Thank you for updating.

The flash makes his presence known to the parkers, wonder what he and his team got in store. Nice to see Peter and Tess back each other up like that shows their silbling bond. College and work has been kicking my butt so I feel you

Well whatddya know? Superman does have a sense of humour! Lol.

I hate cliffhanger. but good chapter overall

Loved the chapter. So this universe is just starting up. JLA is not formed yet, hope the Spiders will be a part of the founders. Whats the deal with Rachel and Peter i feel like Rachel is going to screw Peter's life soon. So what are the Powers of Peter and Teresa are they same or there will be differences. And how many people know about Supes Identity. Is Dr. Wells Reverse-Flash like in the TV. And is it just me or with Dr. Wells in Wheel chair and they searching for Metas feels alot like the X-Men. Thanks for a great chapter and Best of luck with future chapter and Stories. Still waiting for Assassin Spider. What is the Pairing in this story for Teresa and Peter.

This was great, I enjoyed it alot. And the plot thickens with The CW Flash picking up on our young spider heroes. Cant wait to see what happens next

Your version of DC Peter is bad*ss haha. "You wanted my *ss, had my *ss, and you let my *ss walk away. so the only *ss left is your dumb*ss" I laugh so hard seeing that line. Tess makes a good sister for Peter in this universe as well. I already have feeling rachel is going to screw things up with Peter. Zatanna makes her entrance to the story, that will be interesting to see how you write her character. Lastly nice touch with the Batman v Superman and The Flash TV show references.

This chapter is full of surprises. I love the idea of Peter and her sister Tess having spider powers. I noticed you added Batman v Superman and The Flash TV show. I love it. This universe is different and I'm guessing The Justice League is not around yet. This story has so much potential. Thank you and please keep writing.

Can the redhead in the Disneyland photo be Barbara Gordon?

Base on the title I can tell this is going to be a big project for you. Still looking forward for Spider-Phoenix to return to his dimension.