| Reviews for RWBY: Kitsune no Reaper |
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Borello chapter 18 . 5/4 this story is great. i hoped to read more chapter. |
Naelyon chapter 1 . 4/12 I never understood people who made plots like this. 'Better make Naruto hide who he is and pretend to be a weakling for... Reasons'. That's just idiotic, also why do you go out of your way to change canon with the whole hybrid faunus thing. Is it just because you want to turn Naruto into the little bitch he used to be in Konoha with the whole 'Woe is me, everyone hates me for things outside of my control' act? |
Chronosign chapter 5 . 3/7 He's going to be a alternate isn't he? |
Chronosign chapter 4 . 3/7 Go Team RWUBY |
Chronosign chapter 3 . 3/7 Naruto must be having Deja Vu from accidentally kissing a person with black hair and pale skin. A more enjoyable version of the Sasuke incident. |
Chronosign chapter 2 . 3/7 Ozpin is being such a petty, fairly paranoid, asshole denying Naruto's licence. |
Chronosign chapter 1 . 3/7 At first I thought you were going to make Naruto reincarnate as Glynda's son. |
Guest chapter 6 . 2/13 Why are some commas missing? |
LinkBreathoftheWild chapter 2 . 1/28 Just a reminder Naruto turned 17 before his final battle with Sasuke in canon and his two in half year training with Jiraiya ended when he was 16. |
xSean chapter 2 . 12/13/2019 This is where I stop reading. Naruto dies, ends up in remnant, is 15 at the time of the war because why not, tells Glynda everything about his life for some stupid reason, he has his arm back in the world of the living, Glynda is hiding information from Ozpin, Naruto can no longer use his Chakra but it's still there and for some reason he decides he needs an alias because hes 'becoming to famous for his own good'. The first 2, dying and ending up in Remnant is perfectly ok. Even the fact that he is 15 instead of 17 like he should be can be overlooked. The rest? Not so much. No one, I repeat no one is ever stupid enough to spill their guts out to the first person they meet, especially when they are telling them about a war, his mistreatment, his friends, the Akatsuki, being from another fucking world. He may as well have went on live television and just told absolutely everyone because why not?! He has his arm back. How? He lost it in the war. Him having it in the spiritual realm I can understand. Him having it when he is back amongst the living in Remnant though? No. He appears fucked up when he lands in Glyndas bath tub but somehow his entire arm has regenerated. Stupid. Glynda hiding information from Ozpin, I don't even know where to start with that. Glynda works for Ozpin and is part of his group. There isn't anyway she isn't telling him of a dimensional traveler. Lastly his Chakra. I don't know why people do this. If you don't want an OP Naruto don't use a fucking End of War Naruto! It is honestly as simple as that. I already have theories for why he can't use it. Those 'holes' in his body werem't Sasuke. Something ripped out something spiritually important to his Chakra right? I bet so, makes a lot of sense. Let rip out something essential to his chakra, y'know let us beat him half to death as well. Just for our daily dose of good will though, let's give him his arm back! Yea. Sounds like something a stupid, generic, cliched, fanfiction writer would do. Naruto is all about earning recognition and fame through his own actions for most of the series, even if he grows out of it he still wants to be seen as himself. Not hiding behind some fucking stupid mask. Getting a mask and becoming anoynamous is literally the last thing Naruto would do. |
MaximumMagic chapter 1 . 12/12/2019 Good start |
uzumaki.namikaze10 chapter 17 . 10/30/2019 Do any of you had a teacher that just pick on you because of a grudge. I do. My English Teacher. And one day I can't take it anymore and start talking back. He wants to show his power, telling me to go outside. But when I passed by him I punch him in the nose so hard that it broke along with his glasses. It got into my record but worth it. I regret fucking nothing |
uzumaki.namikaze10 chapter 15 . 10/30/2019 This naruto is a little nit of a wuss. He let all people walk over him |
uzumaki.namikaze10 chapter 14 . 10/30/2019 Good for you Naruto |
uzumaki.namikaze10 chapter 13 . 10/30/2019 Good Chapter |