You keep missing out certain words that changes the sentence altogether

Just re-read this story very good with plenty of action and mystery.
Like that Naruto is able to fit in with his new people (no women ?).
Next chapter (installment) should be of a battle scene.
Believe Naruto will want to visit his planet of birth and see a few old friends.
Bet he is looking for a girl friend (Hinata ?).
Hope update comes out soon.

If this is how you speak in real life considering your grammar. You have my condolences.

Wow dude, really? Sniggers? Might as well take away the s and say niggers. Say snicker like everyone else. Snigger is racist. It’s like saying nigger. Don’t be racist.

I don't really see what Naruto brings to the Forerunners. Even with supernatural ninja chakra, the forerunners should have been able to easily beat them.

I was fine with them taking and training up Naruto. I'm unclear why they chose him rather than one of their own. Plot reasons.

On visiting the SW verse, I was sort of mixed. I can handle the forerunners handling some of the Star Wars setting, but the Empire, Republic, Old Republic, or Sith Empire would cause major issues for them. I doubt the Forerunners would just be able to roll right over things like that.

If they did, why not stay? Also you've got to recall that the forerunners can look at other galaxies. The SW stuff is pretty much only in one galaxy. There should be an entire local group of galaxies that would be suitable for rebuildling their civ without having anything dangerous around.

I can see why they would scavenge and come across holocrons. The force training might be totally useless outside that galaxy. That microorganism is needed to be all over the place for it to really function. Without it, no force powers. Doesn't mean that he couldn't use it as a base to start his chakra control experiments.

It would be limited to body reinforcement stuff though. The seer stuff or telekinesis wouldn't translate.

Most of the chakra stuff is usually elementally expressed.

I'm sort of lost on time frames and goals. They seem like just wandering around. Um, come on they could just build a few culture style GSVs and explore that way.

I sort of want them to come across the Reapers.. Their moral code would pretty much demand that they stay there and remove the Reapers as they go against The Mantle.

Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.

First things first, I love the cover photo! And now onto other stuff. Some of the science-y stuff went completely over my head, I can't remember exactly what, but this is a great story! And the OC's! Great job with them! Also, I think a few descriptions would've been good, such as what color the ships and stuff glow (I'm assuming blue). I find it funny how when the Forerunners discovered the Star Wars universe/galaxy, Monitor-117 was like "yeah... nope." Anyway, keep up the amazing work! Oh! One more thing! The names! Absolutely fantastic, although a bit weird to use in a sentence.

I liked the chapter!

I miss the one before this

Will he be returning to The Elemental Nations?

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um... Slipspace does not use conventional space its uses higher dimensional travel. so they can just go out the void... as they only return to real space when they exit their slpspace stream

so confused with the jedi/sith holocrons, why add them in?

I was starting to fear this story died, please don't scare me like that again, this story is so great and has so much great potential and I want to read more, please continue soon.

I love this fic thus far I can't wait for more this is awesome