| Reviews for Cold |
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Literaturelover1100 chapter 1 . 3/12/2011 Wow. Absolutely amazing, brilliant, and captivating! Awesome, you are a gifted writer. |
LikeAVision chapter 1 . 8/31/2010 This was lovely,I've been DYING to read a fic like that for AGES-somehow I love AU nextgen Potter-Malfoy fics; guess because I really can't imaging Scorpius and Lily together,because of the I have a suggestion-in this fic,everytyhing is so rushed,and you change the person when you go into flashback,so maybe you should divide the fic into parts-put the flashbacks into italics,label the time and place where events are taking place,use * or -&- to divide it into segments,etc. Oh,okay,shit,this fic was published seven YEARS .Anyway,if you're still here,you could do I just wanted to tell you how much I liked this.:D |
Rynn chapter 1 . 1/22/2008 Oh my goodness, I cannot put into words how much I loved reading this. You took a surprising angle with their relationship and for once they didn't hook up in detention. Their meeting and their development is so realistic, not pushed and yet has a good pace. I love both James' and Elisabette's characters, they genuinely care for each other. The only thing I must scold you for is not updating this. Therefore I shall urge you-update this, it's beautiful and deserves to be finished. |
mustardgirl1128 chapter 1 . 9/28/2007 so cute! you should add to this one! haha the broomstick at the window thingy again... i know it was in story of lily, but anywhere else? cute. james sounds just like harry, all protective and brave. i loved the old-harry. nice job! |
Four and Twenty Blackbirds chapter 1 . 4/22/2007 This is AMAZING! I love it! |
Victoria Humblydum chapter 1 . 4/22/2007 aw, very sweet. i just wish that the story continued, but oh well. |
Razor to Rosary chapter 1 . 3/31/2006 Such a beautiful story! I loved it. I think you should continue it. Keep up the great work! Ari |
rbt1980 chapter 1 . 12/6/2005 I was wondering if you were going to update this story ? I have a a couple of questions . 1 why did you not put any Weasley's kids . the other thing why did Draco not send Harry and Ginny a Howler saying keep that no good son of yours away from my Daughter ? |
google chapter 1 . 1/3/2005 This is a great beginning! Continue it soon! |
Melika Elena chapter 1 . 12/23/2004 I hope this wasn't a one-shot... It's really good so far. I love it. Please update soon! Oh, and Merry Christmas! |
123jay chapter 1 . 10/29/2004 great story. Would love to read more :) |
Emily chapter 1 . 8/29/2004 i need another chapter to read this one was briliant! i love this story already another chapter another chapter another chapter another chapter another chapter another chapter another chapter another chapter another chapter another chapter another chapter another chapter another chapter another chapter another chapter another chapter another chapter another chapter! PLEASE! |
opal star chapter 1 . 8/4/2004 that was so sweet - i hope you do another part! |
Sarias chapter 1 . 7/5/2004 No! You can't do this to me! You got to have a second chapter. Please! I beg you this is killing me. . |
Camillekiss chapter 1 . 7/4/2004 I do hope you're writing a second chapter, 'coz there will be Hell to pay if you don't! OMG! You are tormenting me by ending your chapter there! Argh, if only I could hate you - but I can't, seeing as you are providing me with lots of good stories. Damn, stupid war going on in my head: KILL HER! - No I can't -JUST KILL HER! - Na, 'coz then how could I be able to read good stories? And so on and on. Release me from my suffering! (and all those others poor, poor readers) I even reviewed, gimme a break! Lots and lots of love, Camillekiss |