An interesting concept and well written fic. I hope you'll continue it someday.

I am very much enjoying this story, I love that you brought Federico back as a ghost and that Ezio can see him and feel him and I also LOVE brotherly bond Federico and Ezio have within it.

I can't get enough of it, but now I'm sad since it's been a while since you posted a new chapter and I really want to see more of this story, more of these brothers and possibly more hugs (lots more) from them and maybe a moment where Ezio gets severely hurt and Federico is like freaking out.

Pls update soon.

Haha, I remember when I first played AC: Brotherhood. I died sooo many times on the first mission. It was both stupid and hilarious. :P

Safety and Peace be with you.

Interesting concept :) I like it

Interesting chapter... I guess I never thought of how Ezio got rid of the posters in the games, but I assumed he didn't just throw them on the ground for them to blow around... it makes sense though. There was probably a lot of garbage in those days so no one would pay a piece of flying parchment any mind.
As always, dearly, I wonder where this story is going. How Frederico involves himself in the original plot is insightful, but knowing what's ultimately coming, is it necessary? Will this entire fic really just be a retelling of ACII but with Frederico's ghost following and assisting Ezio everywhere he goes? The first chapter suggested otherwise, which is why I stay, but... I guess I was mistaken?
(You're hyped for the movie? Would you be willing to tell me why?)

Yea, I really hope Ubisoft doesn't screw this up or else 2/3 of the fandom's gonna leave. REALLY hopeing that there's gonna be that Ezio cameo though!
Safety and Peace

Thank you for updating! I really love this story and I can't wait to see what happens!

Aww, so sweet. I'm in as long as there won't be any Frederico and Ezio shippings. Seriously, family shipps?! That's to much even for me and I'm 25% sane!

-It took me until I was in my car halfway back to the office to realize why he'd said that: he'd seen the Assassin's Creed book I had in my purse. Whoops. I'd completely forgotten I'd put that book in my purse that morning - probably not the best reading material to bring to court.

I'd be the worst assassin ever.-

Shaun Hastings: Yes indeed "Go-Go Spiders", you are the worst assassin ever.

Rebecca Crane: Shaun!

Shaun Hastings: Okay okay, it was a joke, a joke. Or was it?

Ahhh he just went poltergeist on some guard! That is so damn awesome. :D Will be nifty in battles to come. Also must thank you for giving me the nurse to continue writing my own Rico centric AU fic! you're a life saver

Your writing style is nice and coherent~
I'm still wondering why you decided to extend the story, but with Leonardo added, I may change my mind. I do love his curious personality and the way he interacts with Ezio! (Though I have to say, didn't Ezio meet him before everything turned bad in the games while walking with his mother?)
I guess I'll have to continue to wait and see where this goes...

I love how observant Claudia was in the game, and I'm even happier to see its use in your story. It's just sad that she can't see Rico

Ugggghh poor Rico having to see his sister and mother like heart is already hurting more.

I love this so much. Federico is my favorite but no one ever writes about him any more :(

Ah, so, I am guessing that the story will end once Frederico has assisted Ezio in avenging their family and there will be many tears to follow...

I am currently curious as to the difference in moods of the chapters. I have to say that chapter one was written so beautifully that I wondered how/why it must continue, but I cannot deny I am interested to see where you can take this... As of yet, however, compared to the beginning, these chapters are a little... too self-explanatory for my tastes. Nevertheless, I thrive off of our Ezio's suffering and look forward to what you have in store. I hope there will be much angst to follow! :3