Pooooooor Theoooo! What a cruel world!

Goodness. This is just perfect.
Thank you.

OMG THIS IS SOOOOOOOO GOOD ACTUALLY! BRILLIANT WAY OF WEAVING THE OLDER GENERATION AND THE YOUNGER ONE! I LOVE IT! KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!

This was disturbingly dark.

I actually rather liked Theo, even though he was unstable. He really was working to better himself.

Oh my, well isn't this a diamond in the rough? Quite a masterpiece! It really deserves more attention.

I love how Hermione slowly got darker, matching Tom in cruelty and fire. Dark Hermione is perfect for him. They make a beautiful and ruthless couple. I couldn't help but cheer for them with each successive stage of their vendetta. Revenge is a dish best served cold. The darker part of me was quite captivated by their little reign of terror, and by the end of your story, I was living every dark and body word of it.

Poor Theo though.

Loved your story!

Definitely summed this up in the title. A very interesting and intense piece. Introduced, developed, and wrapped up extremely well. Only thing may be that Hermione's character didn't feel very true, as if any other character could've taken her place in this piece, and the story would remain the same. Not quite sure how to explain or describe the feeling. Otherwise, again, wonderful piece. Thank you for sharing.