Pls make more this is a great concept!

Please update

pls make more updates I love this story

I remember reading this for the first time... Ah, good times. Now? It’s a cool idea, but it’s implemented in a very... strange way. It depicts people from earth as paragons. *laughs in nationalism* No offense to fellow Earthlings, but as a whole? We kinda suck. Not from a military sense, realistically speaking the Grimm would be an absolute fucking joke to any modern military. Hell even a WW2 era military would probably kick the Grimm’s ass. This is conventionally speaking, meaning I’m not including nuclear/chemical/biological weapons.

But I digress. There is racism, radicals, corruption, religious zealots, etc... I do love the twist with the Faunus and the red hand though. Point is the people of earth generally would be weirded out by the Faunus, but would probably get used to them and stop caring.

Also lololol Atlas get fucked by da big shroom.

I was a bit peeved by the idea that America needed help from hunters(“needing” help, ha!) enough to make their own, but that’s mostly my nationalistic side rearing it’s head. Logically speaking though, I understand the CIA’s interesting in their abilities. It makes perfect sense for our government to want to utilize these new powers to augment their military might. However, it makes more sense for the US to completely laugh off the idea of creating their own hunters, and instead just giving aura to their existing troops. With some training on how to use it and an overview on semblances of course. Some may question why I say this. In response all I have to say is this: the US military is already shown to be perfectly capable against the Grimm, and hunters, without the assistance of hunters within this very story.

So if the current system is working just fine, then why fund a massive project to create hunters? Why spend potentially billions of dollars to create something that isn’t even loyal to your own country?(if you remember, hunters are loyal to all of humanity[I include Faunus within the term of Humanity] not any one specific nation or kingdom) It simply doesn’t make sense. I cannot speak for the other countries of earth as they are not shown fighting against the Grimm in this story in any significant capacity.

Don’t even get me started on how much the sudden appearance of new continents would fuck up global trade routes, migration patterns, weather, tectonic plates, wildlife, etc.

All in all, really cool idea. Somewhat poor implementation.

To Dimas15
Should I remind That 9/11 never happened, because of the Grimm and not to mention that at least earth are not very racist after 70’s or 80’s, and the reason the people of earth acting like this is because they all want to see the newcomers from a another world.

Ok i have a problem about this, here's why.

Almost of the humans on Earth, especially in America would not be that friendly to the Faunus that easily since it's set LITERALLY A YEAR AFTER 9/11 (you probably changed the history in the previous chapters, i don't remember) so they wouldn't trust them or have a party about them,so it wouldn't make any sense they can have a better life on Earth.

So yeah, that's all i got

I just wanna clarified from canadian rider, after some info, the alleged troll that been trolling the review are indeed a pedophile. The supposed troll that using multiple account to troll not only this victim but also another few fanfiction writers is a tactics to lure minors. We not sure if he was been arrested or not but the person that went around trolling the review section is indeed a pedophile. if the next time he make an account please contact the police or fbi he is too dangerous to be left around. This is a warning to anyone and a serious matters.

are you still alive because this fanfiction is the best one yet,i hope your not planning on discontinuing, because your work is the best one yet. keep up the amazing work ;)

Are the Terran ships going to look like the ones from Call of duty infinite warfare, that would be awesome

Bro i just realized that the person that trolling all the site here are the same person
and his identity was confirmed who really he is. To any user reading this, that this person that constently leaving troll comments with different name is actually a pedophile, he just trolling just to lure out a minor, dont be concern about his comments he just wanted to bait an unsuspected victims. So that makes this person will always came here not only to troll any random user but also trying to lure a minor. Shocking eh?

I like Remnant in Earth it’s so interesting.

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