Damn you! why did you stop so soon?! I wanted to see sasuke get beaten up so badly! PLEASE CONTINUE I need some more chapters!

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someone who loves this story

goddamn, I haven't cried since my dog died over 6 years ago, I'll keep reading even if it turns out I don't like it. I've needed to let some of this out, thanks so much

"I am really happy to say that this is one of the top 10 stories with the NaruTema pairing"
Does anyone know the other nine stories on this pairing?

500 ryo is not that much especially not for The kazekage

And where is the continuation?0

Wow Sasuke is a little bitch

I look forward to continuing!

Not bad, but also not complete. The relationship with Temari could have been done better, probably. It seemed to come together too fast and such. The part where Konoha banishes Naruto is always very hard to believe. Konoha losing their Jinchuriki increases the odds of an invasion.

If you ever get back to this, one idea you could possibly use to perhaps tighten up the arc and make it more believable is if Naruto accidentally killed Sasuke when trying to bring him back. At that point banishment becomes more plausible, and, well it gets rid of Sasuke, who isn't really helping this story much.

This chapter really hit the feels made me shed a few tears

Naruto in suna... I love its a great idea that should be used more.

Uhm why is temari asking Naruto to marry her? Naruto already asked her its why she has the ring...

Not gonna lie, I sped through this fic in two days. I just genuinely loved it. I’ve always wanted to see more of Naruto’s and Garra’s friendship(including the sand siblings) explored and this fic just gave me pure satisfaction. I also really like the pairing, so fucking cute. While I was surprised with how pretty much everyone supported Naruto’s exile(especially Jiraiya and Kakashi) I like how you’ve handled all their characters. Sasuke’s an asshole but I guess that can’t really be helped in most fics, dude’s got issues. Although I do feel pretty bad about Sakura. All that being said I don’t know if you’ve abandoned this fic or something like that but I do hope you continue this story at some point, it’s really great in my opinion.

I like this story.

how on earth did he get any kind of spying through narutos seals? he is literally the greatest seal master in the element countries and you want us to believe he doesn't have the strongest seals placed on his house? even if they're not active under and attack he should at least have privacy seals up

Honestly speaking I do not see what Sasuke could do to ruin their family. Naruto is far stronger than him and if earlier chapters are any indication then Temari is as well meaning that taking her by force is out of the equation and I don’t know how else he would be able to even try to take her away from Naruto. I am also slightly confused, earlier in the story Sakura had said she was over Sasuke and had started to care about Naruto but these last two chapters show no such thing. This would most likely be explained later on but since you seem to have abandoned this story I don’t think that is going to happen. Which is too bad because I absolutely love this story and how well written it is and was really looking forward to seeing them take on the task of parenthood together. Hope you come back someday and finish this story.