You know this is one of my favorite stories but as I was reading through this again I remembered there was one thing that bothered me about this story. Your descriptions of Ororo's color. Ororo isn't really black skinned but brown skinned so when you described what Logan saw instead of "blue and white and black" it should really be "blue and white and brown". Her palms also wouldn't be dark but light skinned. I love this story truly I do which is why I've mentioned this. Btw, previously I reviewed as Darlin.

Intricately, wonderfully beautiful! And yet so full of sadness - the end of all things. Lovely.

WOW that was different but u really seemed to capture everything perfectly.

I Liked it!

It really left me. sort of entranced

Wonderfully twisted...I like it. :) You always manage to capture the essence of Emma so beautifully, it's always a joy to read your work. ~ Jeanne M.

Absolutely loved it. A beautifully intriguing story and well executed. Emma was especially well done, kinda sad and sinister at the same time.