I'm hoping that this isn't dead, it's actually quite good

Oh, I think I know where your going with this, it's Conquest without the Comquest right? Think about it, what prevented Azura from showing Xander and the others from showing Garon's true form? If they realise's this then they could plan to bring down Garon. I hope that's what your going with this, keep up the good work.

Cool so far! But when you're done. Make a version closer to Birthright's story!

Plz update soon, I really like the idea of the story and really enjoy the plot.

Nice chapter! I really loved it and can't wait for the chapter where Elise gets sick. Will Corrin allow her to pass or will he fully turn his back on his family? Can't wait to find out. Keep up the amazing work!

I know this is going to follow the conquest route. But im curious if the war wont be so one sided. Maybe Cheve could actually successfully secede from Nohr under the leadership of Corrin? But then king Garon won't tolerate failure... I don't know. Regardless, I like how you manage to make root for both sides in this and making Takumi less of an ass. Can't wait for your update.

Awesome Chapter! Kinda sad how Felicia didn't go with Corrin but it makes sense. Keep up the amazing work!

This is exactly what I'm looking for. Keep up the good work!

Also, in my previous comment, when I said the story was seemingly solely going to follow Kamui, I meant as a protagonist, because from what it seems so far, Corrin is an antagonist rather than a fellow protagonist simply on a different side. And wouldn't Yato have not chosen Corrin if he truly was so blind? Yukimura himself said this in Chapter 5:
"Yato may be wielded by only a singular warrior. One who is chosen by the blade itself."

Seeing as the sacred blade had chosen Corrin instead of Kamui, I'd think that it wasn't some sort of mistake, meaning that Corrin shouldn't be considered "blind" by anyone, and especially not Azura.

The story is good so far, but it leaves somethings unexplained (mostly with the skips...) and shows a bias for one side over the other rather than presenting both sides as being conduluted with the belief that their side was the "right" side. I get it though that this is only chapter two, but still.

... Sorry if I sound like a jerk, but I just had somethings that I needed to say.

If Corrin was still on Hoshido's side, I don't see why Azura would want to defect and join Nohr, especially since she prefers Hoshido more, as stated in game. Plus, at least one of the two was siding with the "right" side. I would think Corrin staying would've removed some suspicion of Azura being a possible spy from Nohr, which I think would in turn direct more hatred towards Kamui, the true and only "traitor" to the Hoshidans.

How exactly is Corrin blind? Is Azura referring to the fact that he is blinded by his ideals? Or is it just referring to the fact he's siding with Hoshido? I honestly feel a particular bias for the Nohr route, which bothers me somewhat. I understand that this is (seemingly) solely supposed to follow the story of Kamui, who sides with Nohr, but Hoshido isn't the bad side either. Neither sides are even the good sides. There's only the concept of one side being the "right" side.

Interesting idea! There are several grammar errors, though, like how dialogue should be like: "Hello," he said, with a comma if there is a tag at the end. I think the story is making it seem as though the Conquest route is the "right" path, with Azura saying Corrin is blind and Jakob and Felicia both joining Kamui, so you could add some more reasons for Corrin to be siding with Hoshido and have maybe Kaze and Mozu join him, like the other reviewer said. Unless only Corrin gets the Yato and the dragon form, which would give Kamui a disadvantage as well.

I like this so far, but it seems unfair that Kamui gets Azura, Silas, Felicia, and Jacob. Does this mean that Corrin at least gets to keep Kaze and Mozu?

I like the concept of this story. I like that both siblings have the same plan, but very different mindsets, separating them from each other. I'm curious as to how this story will play out and hope that you will continue with it.

Side Note: Will you be implementing the Revelations storyline into this as well, or just using Conquest and Birthright to make the foundation of your story?

Looks like an enjoyable read. Cant wait to see where this can go keep it up!