I really like this story ...I am kinda sad that you are going to change it but its yours. I hope you keep Tony tho because I really like his and Bellas friendship.

I am thrilled you are picking this up. It is such an unique story and I can’t wait to read more.

please finish the story soon this is one of my favorite fan-fictions and i really do want to see the end so
i beg of you please finish this story
your fan, armani

22.
Mind meld
Bpov
Tony your mind to my mind your thoughts to my thoughts hair flying with bangs usd my powers exploiding a self-Daefensive mental and phyiocal shield bit him wit alien veno hadr allows me to blood melded then the four yiu there who turn him the to late myself was really angry focuseing my training the Fire was into my nervous system then wit his with best riends too late screaming good ours then then dids experiments then removed memories brain surgery eerased then with spleen to appendix the three taken the AWit the two asasasulted but abused ten Nothingness the very as all of m,ore than bites as all of from al,ien rattlesnakes wre carnivorous the focusing my brain then the hair grows abnormally body turns into something else not humanb the n the longer with grown bangs then Heaviest then too late it began to throb it's dying beats of our hearts then screaming in fiery pain then suddenly screaming then good we took you then Experimentedd again twice then Scarred but slivery ones then oiinto pain then then myself felt a strange vortex of my own katra forming improving my ablitis train her/they both nuked clone them then too late reappeard on the run half-dead captured the sctreamig looking for them the the fiery power I Need was real then had gained three times of physically good strong strength acted like a Slayer was a fighter Isabella for crimes you are charged with murder Mangled with him with them Brought there with the real ones good them myself was dying gasp then it's her/they them then too late was sickest blown freely then too late nuked nothingness brought both good these ones see dead then it was over Alice she is was abused but assassulted the scars burnibg her harest screaming is turned gasp oh my god then a nightly gloriously but heavenly medical beauty treatment one healed the freshly newest skin took it's place the hair with bangs was fuller thicker firmer healthier body became sensuous but beautiful was paler had Anime Falkor's red eyes could cry like a human girl was stunted like this my throat burns into flames so his with they became very thirsty Alice I am very sorry Isabella you can't be slaughtered but killed or beheaded you are Immortal then you are a Vampire slayer with them then Snapped both with they end them with witnessed then too late ripped with they Alice they can't be beheaded gasp they are Immortal what is that fragrance new skin oh my god Bella yes why are meditating born with Teenaged Ocampan ears eyebrows are slanted I am not human but a Vulcan woman in a colif of my hair in my headdress-crown with twin things my name is Sch'n T'Gai T'Lar of Vulcan I Swore to Ares appeared made me a priestess a woman is a female priest she holds authority ranks and titles granted me robes is Brown Vulcan religious sacred robes underneath white gasp meet my godchildren CJ Is seven with his sehlat looks like who Spock Child of Skon Child of Solkar myself noticed him Edward walking very elegantly but gracefully my voice in my head exploding words telepathically Do you Remember What I Taught you Imzadi Can you Still Sense my own thoughts at all K'diwa eyes of mine were Black irises oh my god he was in horror of a Vulcan woman she's in fact a priestess doctors yes she is in fact Telepathic is not human so they had powers in time mastering became Starfleet strong but Federation marine powerful help! it's Alicia he's coming! Morris! her screams was louder in robes her labor started myself held a blade loose flowing brown sleeves of my robes entered a most holy alien trance focusing my powers then her screaming was louder her last child then it's time announced coldly then her broken waters from her used my powers to calm her down Three two One herself began screaming then a baby's wailing was heard crying loudly then the cord was cut then presented it to her husband Mestral Your Son Alicia you granted me a son our last children your brother came I Have a name for him Soval it was naming day madam Sir! she is a virginal woman what is that ew a girl gross yikes what is her name T'Pring daughter of Solin is my goddaughter I am her ko'tre'ra it was guardian but godmother Egads a human woman birthed a son yes Strom she looks from our planet is not human at all.

They're all f'ing nuts. Good chapter. Thanks for writing.

Really good. Thank you

Oh boy I like

love it...cant wait for more ;)

Thanx

Ay wheee u at this is a good book finish it please

I like

Can't wait till she excepts what happened to her and that the Cullen's are real and they did save her. She already knows they are "The Cold One" she understood the legends let the reunion come it's time.

Thank you for not making us live through the abuse. Please update doon.

TELL-tale, not TALL-tale.

It's spelled WHOA, not WOAH. (Look it up if you don't believe me.)