A well done chapter. Quite interesting to read Arturia's thought process when it came to Mordred, as she was experiencing coming and going headaches, and telling Shirou about it. It would seem that Mordred will be going back to Camelot for a bit and be the acting King or Queen while Shirou and Arturia stayed where they are at for the upcoming war. It was endearing to read how much Shirou cared for Mordred and her well being as well as how much he trusts her to do a job well done in Camelot as she makes her way back. It was amusing with how Arturia was tired of being a handmaid and took matters to her own hand as she helped with coming up with plans on what their side would need to do in order to win. Thank you. Keep up the good work.

For both chapter 85 & 86: (Been busy so couldn't review till now)

85: Definitely can't wait till the next Chaldea Records where the Artoria's learn that Shirou survived but with memory loss and his interactions with Mordred and the changes in contrast from the original timeline. Jealousy will definitely ensue.

86(Latest): I can't wait to see how Shirou, Artoria, and Natalie does things. And it seems like Mordred is returning to Camulot, I hope she'll be fine and that she, and Merlin will repel what ever Morgan is scheming. With her getting assistance from Alaya which cannot be good. Which means Morgan is gonna summon a servant. Still would be awkward if it's EMIYA, EMIYA Alter, Muramasa, or Kiritsugu. Or Kotomine but would make sense though. That being said I definitely look forward to the next chapter and I still in hopes of a small harem route with Artoria, Mordred, and Emily. :) Stay safe from the Coronavirus and I look forward to the next chapter. :)

sooo goooood~

oh. my. god! i fockin love this already~ this got to be good... well then, let's see where this goes~

Great chapter٠

Love these as usual, now the two Lancers remain.

Great chapter, and damn Morgan, hurry up and get pregnant by Merlin's gaze already!

Great chapter.

Guh! Love the romance and the war campaign!

They really are the ultimate battle couple

Alright, that was a real fuckin awesome chapter.

Yes another chapter and love the growing trust between Moedred and Shirou.I hope u create a different final battle and hope the Couple get their deserve must be going desperate and going all out to bring down the kingdom.I wish every chapter get a chaldea record and wish to see the Arthurias save Shirou and see the changes of their timeline.I hope in future chapters that Mordred is Shirou and Arturia Daughter.

Okay, this plot twist is a good one. Shirou losing his memories I mean. But him meeting Mordred is a foreshadowing of great entertainment, especially when Arturia steps in again.

Most interesting is the coming turnover, from Shirou knowing some things of Arturias future to her knowing most of his past. I wouldn't mind if it takes some Time for Shirou to regain his Memory.

Hi,

At the start, you miss quote: winning battles can lead to losing the war, not the other way around.

Still a nice story to follow thanks.

One would think that what Shirou did just made the Battle of Camlann inevitable, but there are some key elements that put this in doubt. Even if it does happen, it will probably look very different from how it did in the original timeline. For starters, Merlin is still in play and it doesn't look like he's going anywhere anytime soon. Second, Mordred's situation is very different from how things were in the main timeline. Mordred's rebellion was essentially her throwing a temper tantrum over her "father" not recognizing her as her successor, and Morgan filling her head with dreams of being acknowledged by her "father" and succeeding her certainly didn't help.

In this timeline, Shirou is very much like a father to her and is trusting her to keep the kingdom in order in his absence. Even Arturia respects her and trusts her enough to keep an eye on her children, which is something she does not trust many people with. To Mordred, betraying the trust of her king and queen is unthinkable, doubly so if she also unknowingly sees them as her parents. In short, this Mordred has so much good going for her that there is no way she would willingly stage a Rebellion against Shirou. Morgan would have to take direct control of her to do that, and that would not work for long or even at all since Merlin is still in play and would quickly figure out what is going on. Since Mordred is going to be in close proximity to Merlin for the foreseeable future, Morgan would need to find a way to remove Merlin from play if she wants to control Mordred. This means that if the Battle of Camlann does happen in this timeline then it for very different reasons than it did in the main timeline and will have to look very different as well for anything to make a lick of sense.