Sure has been a while, hasn't it? Certainly happy you continued writing. Especially to write THIS, by the ever fucking Light, THIS!

An improvement to over all detail, even more variety in vocabulary as before, a natural character build, perfected comedic timing and a bit of heartwarming bondage below all the cold ice! Dare I say - despite sounding too far like a kiss ass - that if not too heavily parodied I could see this was short story on the Blizzard website (minus the language, I suppose).

Out of all in your writing, I have sorely missed your brutal, cynical, condescending, grim and hilariously blunt portrayal of Arthas Menethil. He is just so...perfect, a dead on parody of any maniacal dictator and genocidal maniac. I could listen to you write his bitter commentary and snide quips all day! And this time you set him up with, instead of an equally snide if not even more bitter and cruel character, a righteous pillar of just pompousness who - to no surprise - is his arch enemy! In addition, I found the "Adventure Drama" as I would call it also satisfactory on it's very own. Oh, and let's face it, no one gives a damn about Tirion anymore...I wonder if he'll die in Legion so "Sun Shine and Happiness" Mr. Mary-Sue Anduin will lay claim to the Ashbringer. Only the next expansion will tell. To Hell with Tirion! For the Scarlet Crusade!

On a concluding note, do this site a favor and keep writing. Take as much as time as you need as long as it comes out in this quality. My only regret is not finding this story sooner.

May you have best of days, no writer's block plague you whilst doing so.

-Sincerely.
Your fan,

- The Long Dead Empire

Really enjoyed this. Had the right amount of irrelevance.

The amount of tea you owe me for spitting it out in laughter is steadily climbing in number.

That was a great read, definitely novel in its idea and poetically-worded in its execution. I never thought I'd see- or enjoy- banter between Fordring and Arthas and here I stand happily corrected.

Merci.

a fun and good read