Ahhh! They‘re so cute. Please continue

That's such a great story so far! I love Ren, her bounds with HOMRA, and her relationship with Mikoto, I hope we can see more in a future chapter! English is not my native language but I really appreciate your writing style, so it would be a pleasure to read the part two.

Love your story and can't wait to see what happens next so I hope you update again soon plz

hello..i am loving this, can you please continue this story.

Your fic is pretty good. It's not quite my cup of tea, so I won't be following it; but keep up the good work and continue with it. You're a wonderful writer.

I really like this story! I hope it continues. Also I'm a lil confused, is tatara alive? Cuz at the beginning, when she had the fever, weren't they out looking for tatara's killer?

I love your story, so I am going to offer some constructive criticism. The fever 106 degrees is unrealistic. Most people, especially when they are not at a hospital and have endured that high of a fever for a long time would suffer from brain damage, and if they were treated as Ren was before HOMRA, they would likely be dead. The brain essentially begins to cook at around 104, and around 102 is when people go to a doctor. I do not mean to criticize your dramatic-writing style, but to help you. Thank you for your work.

Love your story and can't wait to see what happens next so I hope you update again soon plz

Love your story and can't wait to see what happens next so I hope you update again soon plz.

Holy hell this is amazing you definitely should think about making this into a story I'll definitely read it. The plot of this one shot is extremely good and this turned into a story would be so amazing. I really enjoyed read this.️️️️

This was reallly cute!