A part of the story I can relate With Ruby was when she and Jaune sat together and she unconsciously played with his hair but for me, I was bent forward at the back of my crush watching what while they were doing in front of the computer when I unconsciously was smelling their hair. When I realized what I was doing I also told myself like Ruby did, "Meh, to hell with it." It's funny when I remember it.

This is really good, you juggled a lot of POV in the stories and made it all work in the end.

WHY ISN'T THIS BEING CONTINUED ARRRRGHHH!

Jaune...bro...just hold onto your shield for dear life...Block, block, block RUN

I like it!
Please continue!

the parents are always scary

I want to see the potential beat down and/or intimidiation that is sure to result from this meeting. Any other continuation would be just peachy.

This story was such a fun read. But to be honest the A/N at the beginning was by far actually more entertaining then the story. I really liked how you and Fate wrote both Juane and Ruby IC and while I do miss the ability for Arkos to not be canon, I do hope she becomes a pivotal death that causes Juane and the others to become the hunters and huntress' they were ment to be. Speaking of Pyrrah, I was so sad when she died, I actually cried for like a minute and a half. I was expecting someone to die, but not her at all. Both of you keep up the good work.

Very truly yours
-The Scottish Hippie-

Sweet glorious fluff. Good thing you mentioned this in the latest Lunar Rose chapter or I might have missed it.

I never get tired of seeing the dorky leaders of Beacon interacting. It enjoyed seeing them go out together.

Jaune going with Ruby to visit her mom's grave, that will be interesting to see. Thus begins Jaune's grand adventure.

Not really a big fan of the ship. It makes it feel like Pyrrha was just in the way. And the fact that Pyrrha was stopping it implies that Jaune's feelings on the matter are more important. As opposed to Ruby just not being interested. Y'know, the main character.

It just leaves a sour taste in my mouth.

Yes. Yes yes yes. There are so few good Lancaster stories out there. So far, you're doing great. Pls, moar.

I enjoyed it, strange that a grave can provide so much solace for such a cheerful girl, though I can understand how it can be a strong focal point for the reaper. Overall, i'm curious how Jaune will be upon reaching the grave site, could lead to a very touching moment and I look forward to seeing whats next for the two.

I really liked it! The beat of progression, the rise in tension during the date and the whole concept of Ruby needing more of a hands on method to fully accept the day of the train. Cant wait til next chapter