Reviews for Naruto no Zaiho REMIX
Borello chapter 1 . 8/26/2019
this story sound interesting. i hoped to read more chapter.
haseothesage chapter 1 . 6/29/2019
If he gets Servants, let him get Scatach, Jalter, Salter, Quezaqualtol(I know i messed up her name),Serenity of Hasson,Tamanono(Kyubi) ,Nero and, Francis Drake.
reincarnations:
Cu chulain(and have him freak out everytime he see's Scathach for comedy)
Leonidias(have him be a sensei for Naruto
Faery66 chapter 1 . 8/11/2017
Hope to read more soon.

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King0fP0wers chapter 1 . 12/22/2016
Hey Thunder Dragon! Nice to 'read' you here!
Well, you're story looks very promising! Can't wait for the update! Well, the ones I want to see the most are the four japanese Servants Okita, Sasaki, Kiyohime and Tamamo. Though they don't need to be all Servants. You could actually turn the obviously female Kyuubi into Tamamo instead of creating some weird Kurama-chan case. Okita and Sasaki are truly dangerous swordsman, the latter even more considering that he gave Arturia a serious run for her money! A terrifying thought to imagine them using chakra to combine their sword skills with the chakra blades of the Samurai. Imagine a long-distance and larger Tsubame Gaeshi with even less possibility to escape. Bonus points if Okita is in a team with Naruto and Sasaki the right-hand man of Mifune. Finally Kiyohime, though it has more to do with her being absolutely adorable and psycho at the same time.
Maybe Ushikawamaru? The choice is yours I guess.
Thunder Dragon chapter 1 . 9/25/2016
I have a few questions I need to ask about this story and a few ideas for their powers and role in the story if it is okay with you.

Question 1: Naruto's powers. Will Naruto get his cannon abilities and all the powers that Gilgamesh has in Cannon? Because if Naruto gains all the powers of the Nine Tailed Beasts, The Chakra and powers of Asura, Sage Mode and all his cannon abilities and Jutsu from both the Anime and Manga and add that with all the Noble Phantasms in The Gate of Babylon and the gate it self along with all the powers that Gilgamesh has at his best and we have a real wrecker who surpasses the Oldest King and can decimate King Emo duck butt Sasuke Uchiha(who should die when Gilgamesh and the Kyuubi temporarily take control of Naruto's body at The Valley of The End) and Sage Of Six Paths Madara Uchiha and Kaguya Otsusuki without much trouble

Question Number 2: Servant reincarnations and Resurrected Servants. In my previous Review of this story I had placed some recommendations for reincarnated Servants but I also have placed some recommendations for Resurrected Servants and them having all the powers they have from their legends and from when they were Heroic Spirits. So I have to ask can you bring in Servants as their old selves with a little something extra added and can the same be applied to reincarnated servants? Because if they can may I make a few requests for both Reincarnated Servants and Resurrected Servants? Because I have a list of ideas that maybe are worth implementing for this story and my reasons why they should be in the story. Now the ones I listed are Naruto's allies and one enemy. Also if or when you do resurrect my requested Servants please make them have all their powers from their legends and when they were alive. Same with the Reincarnated ones but let me give them a little something special.

First here are the Resurrected Servants.

Resurrected Servant Request Number 1: Arthuria(Ally).
Now here is my reason why I think that Arthuria should return from Avalon. First we all know that Gilgamesh had a massive thing for Arthuria and second while Arthuria had despised Gilgamesh Arthuria would have no problem with Naruto and if Arthuria should find out about Naruto one day fighting against Gilgamesh for control of his body and life Arthuria's chivalry, would do everything for Naruto to win against Gil including help train Naruto in swordsmanship and along with Naruto's Wind Chakra he can literally Slice through his opposition. Also you can maybe make this a NarutoxSaber paring as tapping Saber was something Gil was not able to do.

Resurrected Servant Number 2:Medusa(Ally).
Medusa has had it rough, she was cursed to become a monster by the Gods, She only wanted to keep her family safe, was killed by Perseus after losing her humanity and killing what she swore to protect. So if we give Medusa a second chance she can maybe redeem herself and maybe find love as Medusa blew her chance with Shirou and Sakura Matou so lets have The Bewitching Black Serpent have some love in her life.

Resurrected Servant Number 3:Medea(Ally).
Medea has had it rough(arguably worse than Medusa)she was treated as a plaything by the Gods, made to leave her home against her own will, was forced to butcher her own family, was stabbed in the back and was forced to stab others in the back to survive. She only wanted to go home but was blocked at every path in the Fate Stay Night Routes. So yeah she needs a good therapy/redemption trip and who better than Naruto who has shown the ability to change people for the better to help Medea out. And also let Naruto score with a hot lady and learn how to use Prana along with Chakra and learn the lost secrets of Magecraft from The Magus of The Age of The Gods.

Now For the Reincarnated Servants.

Reincarnated Servant Number 1:Saber Sakura aka Souji Okita(Ally).
Saber Sakura is heavily underrepresented as is Fate KOHA/ACE, so lets give The lady a new lease on life and kick some ROOT and Danzo Ass! Not to mention she would fit in perfectly among the Samurai in the Naruto world and maybe a teammate if you want to change Squad Seven. also I would like it if you kept Soujita's gender and powers the same like in cannon but be able to Summon Wind and Thunder Spirits and like Naruto and Seig be able to use Prana and Chakra in tandem and in true Naruto world fashion be able to use Wind and Lighting style Jutsu's.

Reincarnated Servant Number 2: Sieg from Fate Apocrypha(Ally).
Sieg has had it rough in life. He was originally a Homunculus created to only serve as a living battery but eventually became self aware, he did not place much value on his life and was given a rather frail body that would not last for another year but in time became a dragon after having Siegfried's heart transplanted in him and gaining Siegfried's powers and abilities and before you say anything he is also able to channel the spirit of Siegfried to take on his form three times and utilize all of Siegfried's powers so he technically counts as a servant. You can make him a new Squad Seven Member if you want to shake things up and he has a lot of potential and make him train to gain his Predecessors powers and make Him gradually reintroduce the Phantasmal Beasts back into the world by making first making a Dragon Contract that allows Sieg to Summon Eastern and Western Dragons like with Naruto being able to Summon Toads. as For Sieg's new powers let him be able to use Fire and Earth Type Jutsu's and be able to use Prana and Chakra in tandem(also the Reincarnation thing in Naruto is supposed to be symbolic for Naruto's growth. Speaking of which is Naruto going to gain his Cannon Abilities along with Gilgamesh's powers? Because that would be Glorious! But please make him work for it!).

Reincarnated Servant Number 3: Shirou Kotomine from Fate Apocrypha(Enemy).
Now this Shirou is a bit different from his Fate Stay Night counter part as he has become a true Heroic Spirit and was a revolutionary in his backstory from Fate Apocrypha and as a Heroic Spirit well think of this Shirou as a bit of a mixture of Archer from Stay Night in terms of accomplishing his objectives but with the heart of Shirou Emiya in his intentions. Also if you are going for symbolic rivalries Shirou Kotomine was the main rival to Sieg so we can have some drama in here like in the good old days of Naruto and Sasuke's rivalry(no homo between Naruto and Sasuke or Sieg and Shirou, each of their respective relationship's with their rival was not like that).
Thunder Dragon chapter 1 . 7/14/2016
I have a few questions I need to ask about this story.

Question 1: Naruto's powers. Will Naruto get his cannon abilities and all the powers that Gilgamesh has in Cannon? Because if Naruto gains all the powers of the Nine Tailed Beasts, The Chakra and powers of Asura, Sage Mode and all his cannon abilities and Jutsu from both the Anime and Manga and add that with all the Noble Phantasms in The Gate of Babylon and the gate it self along with all the powers that Gilgamesh has at his best and we have a real wrecker who surpasses the Oldest King and can decimate King Emo duck butt Sasuke Uchiha(who should die when Gilgamesh and the Kyuubi temporarily take control of Naruto's body at The Valley of The End) and Sage Of Six Paths Madara Uchiha and Kaguya Otsusuki without much trouble

Question Number 2: Servant reincarnations and Resurrected Servants. In my previous Review of this story I had placed some recommendations for reincarnated Servants but I also have placed some recommendations for Resurrected Servants and them having all the powers they have from their legends and from when they were Heroic Spirits. So I have to ask can you bring in Servants as their old selves with a little something extra added and can the same be applied to reincarnated servants? The reason why I ask that is because in my earlier review I placed several new abilities for the reincarnated Sieg, and Saber Sakura so to try and spice things up.
strabimonx chapter 1 . 7/11/2016
nice can you have berserker lancelot be naruto's servant
Velshard chapter 1 . 6/6/2016
For me it's too early in the story to form a solid opinion, but overall I do like this first chapter. So many stories I've read recently have almost no exposition, instead the story reads like the script for a play. And I really do hate having to tell people that their efforts are either total crap or just induce mind numbing boredom. Pretty sure I've made a few people commit suicide with how vicious I can sometimes be. In any case I'm not the type to leave a review for the sake of being mean, I do my best to give legitimate(and at times, brutal) criticism. So far I'd say you've done a good job, perhaps not a great start, since this first chapter seems to lack soul. But there is potential here if you really take the time to develop the characters and their motivations/relationships. Remember that every story is about the people in it. If you can't get your audience emotionally invested in the characters by making them easy to relate to or understand, then you'll never fully draw your readers into the story your weaving.
Gawain-Knight of the Sun chapter 1 . 5/4/2016
My servant ideas are:
Saber nero the enthusiastic proud emperor.
Assassin semiramis the beautiful deadly wise queen and owner of the hanging gardens of babylon.
Jeanne alter who was born of the dreams of a madman.
And lancer scathach the trainer of the hound of culann
insanemaelstorm chapter 1 . 5/2/2016
Nice chapter. Loved how the two worlds have been mixed. Loved the character portrayals. The prologue was 't wait for more
Snowdust Haku15 chapter 1 . 4/26/2016
Tamamo no Mai and Lancer from Zero
REGIS MARK 5 chapter 1 . 4/8/2016
interesting story I'll be on the lookout to see how it goes and hopefully a huge harem jajajajajajaja
Avalanche-dragoon chapter 1 . 4/3/2016
Anko-rider-medusa?
gooblegooble chapter 1 . 3/28/2016
Give him arturia(saber) no hinata
Random guy chapter 1 . 3/19/2016
As well as you write I'd really like to see a story from you without genderbends. Couldn't you just write a regular romance -be it single or harem- without genderbends.

Also, are you going to completely ignore his potential as a shinobi, jinchuuriki and Uzumaki to make him a carbon copy of Gilgamesh?

I'd like to see an actual story with a romance between Naruto and Saber. The only story that made an attempt was abandoned. And The Lucid Berserker, as good as it is, does not seem to be focusing on anything romantic between them. Or anywhere for that matter.

So I challenge you, Kurogane, write a Naruto AU with instead of forming a contract with toads, it's noble spirits to fight and live alongside with. And Naruto struggles to melt Saber-chan's heart.

And if it's a harem so be it. I am a fan of God of Ferttility. It's just I want to read a serious story from you especially regarding this Xover. Just no genderbends; especially when there's already so many options -women- in the Narutoverse already.
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