love to see more
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Interesting concept!

interesting

Well, at least Halbeard didn't show up. No offense but I'm pretty sure his power gives him a complex about being efficient in everything including how he sees the world.

I wonder how they'll react to finding out that Taylor's costume is more cosmetic than anything? That they know she's a Brute might tone down the surprise but still. Hopefully, they'll offer her something better if only to help protect her pockets and whatever she might be carrying in them.

"I fell asleep with a smile on my face, today had been a good day." For some, mysterious, reason this last line gave me the chills. Ominous.

Promising start - looking forward to more.

Interesting.