no worries! I understand how you feel; I've been on a Power Rangers high lately so I've been reading more of those than I have any other story (insert sheepishly smiling emoji). sadly with the Power Rangers stories there aren't really a lot of Cam/OC stories that are good, I found a few good ones and re-read them a lot though. Write a new chapter for this story WHEN YOU FEEL LIKE IT, not because other people try to force you into it

Chapter two is as far as I got here. I know you're on hiatus now. I still feel the need to let you know that the way you were writing adoptive twins is less than ideal.

I'm an adopted twin. I understand how this works. I'm older than Henry would be. And no one would just keep one twin here. Studies show it really messes up the twins. The last people who were purposefully separated are still messed up over it. You keep both or you give up both. That's how it works.

And it's the same on the other end too. My sister and I weren't going to be split up if an adoptive parent didn't want us both. They were going to match us with a family that could take care of two babies.

And Emma's mentality as a birth mother in chapter two makes no sense for a birth mom. "I'll keep the girl that way it's only one life I'll mess up if it doesn't work." I have never heard of even a bad birth mom talking like this.

It's just very unrealistic from an adoption standpoint, even with twins involved. The doctor suggesting this felt so weird and off. This isn't common at all. So, while the idea of Henry having a twin is interesting, doing it this way really doesn't do it justice.

What is Eva's unicorn's name?

When will you upload again?

I always thought that while Regina would love the idea of Eva living with her, at the same time she would also want Henry.

its a little too late for the very last sentence of this chapter... great job keep up the great work

Don't like Emma's attitude here... It's irritating acting so self righteous...

When Eva moves in with Regina and Zelena, will she be taking Rosie too?

love it!
can't wait to read more!
hope the next chapter is soon!

okay, so I love your fanfic. But I am sort of missing the whole Regina/Zelena vs Emma thing. I wasnt a huge fan of how you combined seasons 2-3 together and than quickly skipped over them. I would love to see something dark happen. Cause the whole splitting the week with the twins and getting a long like friends is odd. I mean Emma and Regina were just at eachothers throats than do a 180 and are now like best friends? 0_0 Just pops out of nowhere, but like i said before i would love something dark to happen that draws battle lines, but thats just me.

and i'm curious on snow/charming's thoughts on this situation, i mean they are big "regina haters" (or are suppose to be at least since the curse broke)

Still love your fanfic and cant wait for the next chapter

Too short I want more...

Wow Emma's own daughter.
Thank you till next chapter

i love it. especially the ending of the chapter when Eva states she wants to be with Regina. But I am not huge on Henry having magic. maybe its the fact, that I've enjoyed the fact he became the arthur in the show. But one thing I would love to see is Eva hanging with Gold again. I loved how she treated like a grandfather before the curse broke.

Thank you for this chapter

Thank you
Story getting there