Okay, onto the sequel.

Myari seems like a Mary-Sue, but whatever.

I totally thought Sev was gonna date Lucius

who is this so called 'partner'?

Trust you have a reason to your madness?
I have to say I like this story quite a bit. It would be interesting to see how things turn out in the end. Dumbles gives me the creeps in general and within this story it's making it worse. Is he some secret pedophile? I mean that has to be a lot of laws his crossing by going into a students dorm and trying to hide his presence. It makes you think thT he has done something like that on more than one occasion. Does it before but this is on so many different levels of creepizodies.
I'm glad the brothers are starting to get their relationship back on track. Not that way! I meant brotherly affections. Hopefully he is not as scared as before. Sometimes people forget the easiest thing to do is to talk and listen instead of making irational decisions based on misconsived knowledge, like the golden trio do. So much could have been different if that occurred.
I'm starting to see the real flaws that Ron has. More than the his basic views on what he perceives as good and evil. Something tells me that he has similar views to Percy in this series (maybe).
I just cannot believe that you are making Siri evil. I really like him as a character and yes he did some evil things to Snape and others he never was trying to hurt others. Though I won't dismiss this story in the end because I want to see what happens to this version of Harry. I really like him as a character.
Snape is awesome in this too. Hope he gets him in the end and also his twin. I mean they were abused by their current guardians and considering Dumbles placed them their he should have no decision over them.
I wondering if hermione is currently placed under a spell? Her behaviour is own questionable in the second last chapter. As she knew about the snake but was looking up that information? Major WARNING! What the h**l is going on!
Ja ne.

Can't wait for the third book.

Pensieve, taking his memory of the night he saw Ginny and looking at it.
That's legit been stuck in my head like, pull a Goblet of Fire trick to get your answers/clues.

OH MY GOD HARRY NOOOOOOO!

YASSS

I love this story i hope you write more

Oh my gosh I love it

Awesome! I love that Hermoine got a reality check. Thanks for writing it. )

I want to kill all of them for being so rude to Harry.

things are getting heated!

Haiden is an ass lol. Harry deserves better