I kinda like how Jasper was such an arrogant dick in this one. probably what he would be like when still with Maria. very nice.

Loved it ! Jasper is awesome.

Jasper and Bella is a dumb pairing. Jasper wouldn’t give a shit about some stuck up snotty human that thinks she’s better than everyone and uses people. She fucking sucks and so do you. You’re dumb as shit. Jasper would never be interested in that bitch. All she does is bring trouble and be useless, why would he like that?

wish you'd added to this like you hinted. loved it

This was so good, I truly hope you continue writing more of it.

So much fun. I like your dominant and dark Jasper. He’s comfortable in his own skin. This story is well worth the read.

Can't wait for more

That's rape!

Loved it :):):):)

Excellent story! Thank you!

Loved this and would love to read more as I adore the idea of a Vamp Bella who was with Jasper before his Emo stage when he met Alice. Lovely writing honey! ;o)

Wow, there really is a first time for everything. This is the first Geezerwench "production" that I didn't like. I don't mind an "asshole" (Jasper) here and there, but I'll always mind rape-like, non-consensual, or dubious consensual sexual situations.

Bleech!

Well that was a bit disturbing. It should honestly be labeled borderline/dubious consent.

So... What just happened? Is it bad that I actually enjoyed (really shoulda use a different word there) reading this even though some could, probably would, argue that this is kinda like rape.

Personally, I think that this fic? Well this fic show EXACTLY how a dominating vamp like Jasper would pick his mate, and mate with 'em. Though it woulda been polite to at least ask 'er, 'er name first!

So, yeah- I thought this was awesome sauce!

Hope you eventually update this. It's great! I can see Jasper and Bella's furure relationship like a whirlpool, full of emotion.