you know this would be a nice story if it didn't have all the flaws these type of Storys have:

1. too much action too soon in the story resulting in no character depths and no intrest in who actually dies and who does not

2. no time for the mc to practice any of his skills making everything he does improv. which is not exactly all that impressive if after every action your mc takes an extra comment is added along the lines of "if i had time to practice" or "well i have the memory but not the skill"

3. having watched code geass it is extremly boring to read about what is essentially ancient history for the main story…. resulting in me thinking "how long is he going to go on about this meaningless stuff and when is the story going to start" ...

all that how the force feels and how emotions fuel the dark side …. yeah read it in EVERY single starwars story …. it's getting old ….

another "SI" without any knowledge of the universe he's in ? yeah what is the point ….

I don't know what's up with your writing but it's just wrong. The way you phrase things, the words you use. Just so many errors, however small they are; gave me a headache. Fics not bad by any means, but it's definitely a What The Fuck moment for many reasons.

I don’t enjoy it when a character tells everyone his secrets the same day the story begins.

I rather enjoy this new spin on veil. It's like a young and inexperienced veil who never went through Korriban personally rather than the hardened version in the other fanfics featuring him. I hope this one gets updated more soon.

Idea: Implicate the bloodline, by passing it off as a Geass and the Geass as a hereditary ability of the Imperial family. That would diffuse the attention.

Mention that there’s a reason that the same royal family has ruled Brittannia since Alwyn who repelled the Romans. And that it’s the “Holy” Britannian Empire for a reason.

Some members of the family have had certain gifts. Not all, but enough to ensure the primacy of the Britannias over all other nobles.

Say that the information is top-secret, and that while it is a gift within the royal family (technically true with Charles also having supernatural abilities) the identities of which royals have such gifts is a closely guarded secret. He is an exception, as while the gifts are useful, he’s the first in a long time to have direct combat applications.

Best part about it is, even if it leaks, no one can do anything about it. All the other Princes/Princesses would assume they weren’t told simply because they didn’t manifest the gift. Their own paranoia would do everything else.

After all, if it ever comes to light that the Imperial family has supernatural abilities, and you’re a prince or princess without em, you wouldn’t out yourself as being the odd one out by asking others would you? And even if you asked the royals you trusted, finding out they don’t have powers either would just make your faction vulnerable and even more paranoid for those royals who do have powers. The princes would assume everyone but them has powers and so try to hide their own mundaneity.

By passing it off as a trait of the Imperial family, a state secret hoarded by them since they first beat Caesar with it, no one would dare suggest exploiting or experimenting on the Royals.

I have never seen the anime that comes with this but I love the alternative history vibes and I love Delkatar. Keep it up and i can’t wait for more. Maybe you could have him introduce nuclear weapons. That would be a level of destruction worthy of Viel.

Wow, I’m really looking forward to what Del can do with the full support of his staff! He’s getting ready to cut loose and win the war :D

Ahh you are the king of clif hangers...keep up the good work tho can’t wait for Leyte Gulfs bigger brother to show up

Gotta be honest, this and the Stark one are the only ones I read. This one keeps the flashbacks brief, which I find preferable.

It is interesting that Del is bringing people in on the secret.

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It's weird if Charles didn't send some fleet as reinforcements as EU will join Pasific, East China Sea and Southeast China sea theater. It's truly imposible to win unless Delkie have several Hypersonic missile.

Nice seeing this back, good work.

Awesome chapter.

Didn't really expect an update for this story, but it's definitely very welcome. I'm certainly interested if Veil manages to keep the officers loyal to him.