I believe that you should do a sequel. I enjoy stories like this GREATLY. I'm rather screwed up in the mind, as my friends tell me. _~ And I ain't gonna change anytime soon! (If ever!) Hehehe... Raven/Thomas is such a CUTE pairing... I like angsty/romancy stories...

*sighs happily, musing on, well, rather... UNPREDICTABLE topics... Like how nice the pairings are... etc, etc, etc...* - Anyways, I think that it would've been nicer if Thomas' chappie was a bit darker... I absolutely ADORE the idea of blood draining as a pleasurable sensation. I can't exactly say that I dislike any of the pairings that you put in here... After all, I like things like that... I'm so screwed up. - But I likes me like that. So I ain't changin'! Continue this story, or face the terrible wrath of my squirrel army! XD (Yes. I _AM_ insane. _~ Hehehe... Just like Neko... My friends are crazy too. *grins insanely, showing off very sharp looking fangs*) Continue. Make a sequel. And may the sporks be with you. (I took it from one of the screwy stories I'd read a rather long while ago. It was a funny story. At least, the Author's Notes were... -) Anyways... Yeah... Please make a sequel! I beg you! If you don't make a sequel... Well... I'll just become very sad and disappointed because I'm SO dying of suspense... You left off in a way that makes me quite...

Unhappy, for lack of a better word. t's actually far more... Ah, I can't think of the word at the moment. But whatever. It's unimportant. What _IS_ important, is you making a sequel to this GREAT story. Do it. It'll be just as good, if not BETTER than this one.

*whering a flashers trench coat and a fake moustache* Wow! What an increadable chapter! It's my favorite. I must be that totally cool muse of yours, She is obviously very talented and intelegent. and extreamly attractive to boot!

*ehem* I think there was something missing at the end though. and that is.

A SEQUEL!

MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHHA! * rips of the trench coat* that's right it's me! Every one ask for a sequel! come on! she wrote this thing like a damn prequel, it NEEDS one, I NEED one. It'll be totally cool, i promise. *in a whisper* Besides FD-chan loved the idea, she's just lazey!

*chiby eyes* Vote #1 for sequel.

*smiles* You did a great job with this, the ending was adorable. *evil grin* It's okay if you do not make a sequel, but I wanna see more

Raven-x-Thomas from ya! _

-Naomi

*cries* No, Hiltz is not a bastard! *cuddles her plushies* Nonononono!

I find it interesting that you bought in characters from Digimon 02. Ordinarily I would have gotten a bit angry at that, but I won't hold it against you. This was another nice chapter, even with the hiltz bastardization. Biowolf sees this, she's going to be a little bit upset ;;

It's sort of ok to have done what you did - I admit, some of Rice's stories are very powerful, but please don't do it again. You're not a just borrowed them!

*Hands over a chocolate bar* Present *runs off dragging Hiltz and Prozen with her*

That's a pretty good story so far. Keep it up!

*jumps up and down then glomps you insanely* AHHH! That was amazing. *drools and nosebleeds* I love it... and I see another chapter. *evil grin*

I worship you...*big shojo eyes*

-Naomi-chan

Ooh...another yummy chapter, Demon-san! I like Reese with her French accent - yup, it definitely suits her. The whole incestuous/jealousy/murder thing was splendid...worthy of Anne Rice herself! Deliciously dark and just a tad angsty - great stuff!

Oh, and I agree - it's completely possible to delude yourself about both Digimon _and_ Zoids! *grins*

Okay, I am seeing a terrible comparison to Anne Rice's vampire Chronicles here. This is just a tap on the writs, mind, but I loved the whole Ken Ichijoji thing. I still can't believe he married that annoying chick. I thought she had high hopes for the future and then of course, she ends up being a mother...go on, I know you want to. Turn Ken on her. *laughs evilly*

I also really loved the Hiltz/Prozen thing. I can't thank you enough for that, even if you killed them both. *melts into a puddle of Plink goodness...* ;)

Sorry I didn't review this chapter when it came out! Interesting take, and I think you caught the bubbly persona of Fiona very well. She certainly has her priorities right!

I think I'm starting to support Fiona and Rhyss pairings...

*Blanklystares at screen*

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*Blankly stares at screen*

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What can I say? If I swore; I would scream out a load of good profanities... thatwasfvckingfantastic! That is waht I would start with...

CW: Mael; keep breathing... It WAS FANTASTIC! I SOOOOOOO WANT MORE

Mael: *Between hyperventalation and ectasy* SOOO GOOD! I will now say, you had me captivated throughout this entire story line... French accent - ja adore it!

CW: And she could be wearing something goth... this could scare me back into het stories

Mael: Yeah right; you are still worthless cause what have you helped me with... If you wrote another; you are just too good.

Words cannot explain the coolness.

I am forever in your debt for this chapter

Maelgwyn and CW

Darker cooler; I soo wanna see Raven and now I wanna see Ken the shrink... Fiona is still innocent; so therefore it would be a lighter chapter all together... but Thomas should have been darker ~ an abusive upbringing, something forced onto him... something wasn't quite right... UNLIKE THIS PERFECT CHAPTER!

BIG buddy

oooooo you did it agian... another wonderfull chappy... but i havent talked to you in some time :::sobs:::: but thats okay dokey... see i learned a new phrase! okay dokey okay dokey!

little BUDDY!

*LOL* This is great! The first chapter seemed more serious, but I was laughing at the second one when the shrink was gettin' a little -too- interested at the thought of lesbian sex! Hee-hee! Anyways, an excellent descriptive piece, very dark but also kinda sweet. If you feel the urge to write the other two POVs, I'd say go with it - you definitely have my vote! _

Oh, you are evil! And No I am not logging in eitehr. I loves this story, but I like Thomas better, cause he was so misterious right up to the end...

Anywho, whateva turns you on, just do it...

The stupid family dogs knocked the cable out of the wall socket, so I lost my review.

I'll say it again: It was confusing because I didn't know who was who, but at the end I understood. That's the only prob' I've got with it

Other than that, thank December for Thomas x Raven! *grins* Nice work

o.O I am evil? Hehehe, normally it is insane, not evil...

I LOVES the blonde headed Vampire, hehehe I am out at night almost as much as him too ( dont ask me where THAT came from...)

Anyway, I am honoured to be the inspiration for your fic...

Nother chapter?

Maelgwyn