Beautiful. Wonderful story

Good luck on your book. I’m going to get a copy next pay check haha

I know it’s a fox. Written from a male perspective. But every woman would’ve put up more of a fight and would’ve made so much commotion about his rudeness. I like the story but he’s getting pretty hard to deal with

Rereading and enjoying it even more than when you wrote it!

I loved this story so much! I loved the interesting twist that Edward was a hybrid and Carlisle and Esme were his actual parents. It was cool what Bella's blood did to him and vise versa. And I loved that he was able to heal her and they were able to have children! Thanks for sharing!

Such a good story love the twist on him being the product of Carlisle and Esme and half human . Bella and Edward are perfect so far great story

Ok so I understand this was written with a prompt of control(or something like that) but omg Edward makes me want to scream. He is soooo overly controlling. I mean, I get it, but seriously. She barely knows him.

Beautiful. Lovely. Perfect. All the feels. Thank you for writing this3

Beautiful story!

I just somehow found this story. Thank you for writing this happy spin. I thoroughly enjoyed it!

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Such a beautiful story and loved your Vamp Edward he had some of the traits we love without being over bearing and was apologetic. I have to say I didn’t miss the other Cullens so often they are in everything and it was nice to keep the focus on just their relationship with a sprinkle of familiar names. Great job.

It's "squeaky BRAKES," not BREAKS. A car has BRAKES.

loved it

Love this story

I don’t think I’ve read a story similar to this one. I enjoyed reading it so much. It was sweet and refreshing!