Reviews for Zootopia: After Dark |
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TheAllSeeingEye4812 chapter 2 . 4/6/2019 I defiantly want to read a fallow up on this ch |
neverfadehaz chapter 1 . 6/25/2018 it's super hilarious please consider continuing this storie |
JerricaHMcfarl3 chapter 3 . 10/1/2017 super funny just wondering if bogo actually knows what happened |
Aeshna Lacrymosa chapter 1 . 6/22/2017 This was a fun and wonderful chapter. Just one correction: Judy isn't really "small for a rabbit"; she is actually taller than both her parents. |
Sarri chapter 3 . 12/6/2016 Please Continue this! I love this story so so so so much! |
Ngrasta chapter 2 . 11/13/2016 "Moooom! Judy and Nick are kissing nakeeeeed!" I died XD btw, seductive Judy adorable! and, y'know, hot as hell / |
Ngrasta chapter 1 . 9/23/2016 Longest 5 minutes of their lives XD |
KingofShadows2019 chapter 3 . 7/31/2016 Are you going to write more about their three day weekend together were they make beautiful love and don't get caught by anyone? I'd really, really like to see that. Please, continue "After the Dark", it's really good, sexy even. P.M me your answer, please. |
HelzLckyAngl chapter 3 . 6/24/2016 I don't review stories often but after reading your one shots I felt it was needed. :) First think you write very well. I enjoyed the love scenes very much because they were based in reality. It was great. :) My problem, however, is I don't understand the need for them to be caught constantly. It, for me, honestly takes away from the rest of the chapters. It feels over done and ridiculous. Not funny; ridiculous. Just, perhaps you could try some regular humor instead of depending on the situation to squeeze out laughs? I just don't find the humor in constantly doing it in a semi public place and predictably being found. It feels like the intimacy of the couple is being undermined and at the end of each chapter all I'm left to feel is awkwardness. No good feelings left. I found it hard to enjoy the rest of the stories when in the back of my mind I knew that someone was going to walk in on them. I know other people find it funny or exciting, it just made me cringe. It all boils down to personality and I realize I'm in a minority of the reviewers, but I just thought it would be helpful to have a different point of view. Again, not trying to be mean. I actually really enjoy your writing and the stories. I just felt deflated at the end of each of them. In any event I hope you keep writing, and whats more I hope you add more chapters to this. |
Muzzlehatch chapter 1 . 6/10/2016 This is just too good. Brings a whole new meaning to the term "anatomically correct". |
Rxn chapter 3 . 6/9/2016 More chapters please Big fan of Nick x Judy |
WyvernsWeaver chapter 1 . 6/10/2016 Delicious. Would love to see this be updated more often. |
NewWorldRunaway chapter 3 . 6/9/2016 Fantastic! |
Xerxes King of Kings chapter 3 . 6/9/2016 I can't believe you've cucked me like this. It was just getting saucy |
Fable Linked chapter 3 . 6/9/2016 Is this fanfic going to follow an actual plot or is it just going to be a series of one/two shots? Because I'd really like to see a continuous plot! 9-9 Whelp until next time! |