Hello! I'm... sad to see this story... end?

An indefinite hiatus means a *TEMPORARY* gap, therefore I am hopeful that this will continue someday. Until then, good luck with writing. Have an amazing eternity, and know that the part that you have written, though only a chunk of the intended story, has been thoroughly enjoyed.

Through Hell and High Water,

Enjoy life,

~S.

It's sad to see you go, but it's ok. We all burn out at a point, and it's not a crime to step away when you need to. I'm thankful that you took the time to let us know about your situation and where this story currently stands.
Take care of yourself, and thank you for the journey.
-Wulfe

Well. . . oof.

Your reasoning makes sense, and while it's sad that we won't see the end of this story, I've enjoyed every minute of what you've written. I guess I'll go check out your other works now! Good luck with your next stories and I look forward to reading more from you

I check my email every few days waiting for a new chapter of ZPIC, can't wait for more!

cielos jaja cuando alguien dice que puede hacer algo hay que preocuparse jaja y no sabe nick que dejar las osas en el aire no llevan a nada bueno

Well... welcome back to Fanfiction, Bleh. Appreciated that you took your time to get Chapter 33 all fixed and put up when it's finally ready.

I am also an amateur when coming to the grammar. So you're not alone here. And I am still working my best to get to where I can hold on my own without any assistance from my editors.

Keep up a great work. I enjoyed the story here and this was what inspired me to start my own Zootopia stories - you should read them if you get a time (even if you choose not to do that).

Great chapter bleh, keep it up! Well the respective group investigations are goin pretty well which is great to see. It sounds like Olivia's havin to do alot since Freddy's mentoring her and Smith cause of their break-up/tension if I remember right. With Nick and Judy I'm surprised given what happened with their vic's sister that she'd think he'd need cheering up in that way. I wouldn't think that sex would be the best way of doin that plus like Nick said that was a while ago and he got over it. I'm honestly not surprised it devolved into an argument between them with her leavin knowin she was in the wrong here. From the sound of things Nick wanted to talk things out. Who knows if Judy was willin to stay things could have turned out differently for her. I'm definitely excited for Emma's ceremony though. It's gonna be fun with at least some of her family from Bunnyburrow there to see it along with her and Judy's parents of course given they're siblings. I wonder what Olivia bein at her ceremony will do to Nick and his sanity though. No doubt it's gonna be entertain to witness though. Can't wait for the next chapter! Regaridin ur progression bleh I'm sure those that support ur work, includin me of course, will understand the delay of this chapter. Ur doin a great job with ZPIC and while I'm sure others wouldn't wanna wait this long for a chapter I personally don't mind in the slightest especially given ur reasoning behind it.

Not bad, unexpected tension at the suddenness and being so straightforward, coupled with the lameness of the reason...no wonder Nick got snippy. But I'm surprised that Judy gave up so soon...

Great chapter bleh, keep it up! I gotta say ur doing very well with this story and I've loved it since I started reading it. Anyway I'm glad that Nick, Judy and Emma are planning to go to Dobby's funeral even though they don't know her much. It just shows how caring they all are. Now to what Fuli pulled the group into her office for, it's pretty cool that Olivia, Nick, Judy and Smith got moved up to the shadowing portion of the program. The fact Nick and Judy were pared with Boris was pretty cool and looks like the B and E homicide case they got goin won't be all that difficult as of now but we shall see what happens. Regarding the other team I indeed wish Freddie luck with both Olivia and Smith with their investigation at the natural history museum. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Great chapter bleh, keep it up! From the sound and looks of things Olivia, Nick and Judy are doing very well with the detective program and pretty much aced the new tranq gun training. Both Judy and Olivia are still getting enjoyment from tormenting Nick. It don't sound like that's gonna change anytime soon. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Great chapter bleh, keep it up! I knew both Nick and Judy as well as Olivia would become detectives one day. It's just too bad in Nick and Judy's case it too their landlady gettin murdered by her own grandson for them to gather the inspiration to apply. As for Olivia it turns out she lost the bet between her and Gid so as per their bet she had to apply for the program. I just hope they all get in. I'm sure that Freddie will be happy if Olivia gets in though. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Great chapter bleh, keep it up! Dang there are so many similarities between whats goin on here with Emma, Derek and Jeremy as there is with Olivia and Freddie. Obviously Emma and Olivia are themselves and as to who's in Freddie's position in Emma's case that would be Jeremy. It's not much of a coincidence that Emma and Olivia went along their situations similarly given Emma talked to Olivia about this first. After the dust settled I'm glad that Jeremy seems to be fine with him and Emma remaining friends even with him bein much like Freddie is with Olivia meaning still havin some kinda feelings for their respective girl. The difference with Jeremy is that he has competition while Freddie doesn't. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Great chapter bleh, keep it up! Gotta hand it to ya Olivia u've been quite the tour guide so far. U really do know alotta history about Tundratown that's for sure. To what happened in the pizza place I'm glad Freddie apologized to Olivia about what he assumed was between her and Gid and yea I get that u still like Olivia but she's right Freddie it's not gonna do ya any good to dwell on it. Ya need to find someone to be real with and that will support ya as well like Olivia said. Now to the question Emma just asked Olivia, I wonder how she's gonna advise her on her current situation between her, Derek and Jeremy? Also will Olivia wanna get Nick and Judy involved given that they're takin care of her? Can't wait for the next chapter!

Great chapter bleh, keep it up! I'm glad that in the end that Olivia and Freddie are still friends. I honestly thought that it might've ended badly based on how the discussion started after they were alone in Gid's shop. Now to the upcoming situation involving Emma and what she just discovered from Jeremy, I wonder how she's gonna react to this when she's with Derek especially when he's been integrated into her circle of friends after he and Emma started their relationship? Can't wait for the next chapter!

Great chapter bleh, keep it up! Gotta say after Olivia and Gid talked after Freddie stood her up, it sounds like her and Freddie are done. I just hope this won't affect the gang as a whole. Can't wait for the next chapter!