Love the sex ! Very hot and all. But I honestly think it would have been hotter for Bella to have gained the upper hand at some point because cocky assholes like this Edward are not always hot.
Still ... I enjoyed it !

hopefully, we will hear from this story soon! amazing as always

please continue

:-)

Can you please conceder continuing this story into them going from bean's & mase to Bella & Edward.
If not can I write it, I think u could be so much better but I like these kind of stories.
There was a story adore you but it was taken down.
I loved this story please see if u can find it in your heart to create more fun with this story.

I loved this! Very hot! I found myself disappointed that it was over. I hope one day that you might consider extending this.

YOU NEED TO CONTINUE THIS STORY OMGGGGGGG

Waaayyy to hot!

good

Well damn. So hot. Thanks

Beans and Mase. I love them. So fiesty and the sex. Wow one word hot! Great one shot although I do wish there was more!

Such a great short story. Hope to see it turned into a multi chapter story.

Gina, Gina, Gina! How the hell did I miss this one? Do I detect a tiny bit of a thaw from Assholeward there at the end? Didn't think he'd be able to write her off as a two-shot LOL! Now, I notice it's not marked complete...dare I hope you are holed up somewhere writin' the heck out of this little jewel?

Such a good short story. I loved it. I'm sorry I'm just now leaving a review even though I read this a couple of months ago.
Thank you so much for writing this and sharing it.

For the love of all that is holy make a second chapter or many chapters. We need more!