the story looked amazing. Maybe try another one with the same concept of zootopia if you don't feel like ending that one.

Living shield or some stuff. Not sure human would work.

It's a shame, this could end up becoming a pretty good AU. Really do enjoy reading it, but as you say a mystery genre wasn't an easy piece story to write as a starter. subplot, Plot twist and climate are required to plan ahead then slowly building the bridge between in order to have a smooth translation between them.

I was about to write a story like yours but never felt quite satisfy by the outline that i plan. Well, like you, i would be mine first story, if it ever came about.

Anyhow, though after reading the outline of the story, maybe you could, just a thought, improve them in a way. That way if you had ever decide to finish the story, it would not only differs from the story reveal here which give a twist to those who already read them. Just a suggestion, no pressure. Since you already had lots on your side.

Anyway, glad you started the story in the first place. It's been honor to stumble upon this story. Cheers.

Well, I'd rather read the complete story, rather than the short summarized one. Fingers crossed things work out for you and you continue this :)

hope the hard life stuff is not hitting you too hard

Did you just kill Fennick!?

Whoa, careful there Judy, your specieism is showing

This is one of the closest to the original concepts of Zootopia i read. And one of the few author that took first person view switching writing style which to my surprise, i actually enjoy it.

Underrated, really, it should have gotten much more attention than it deserved. It got balance of action and character interaction/development. Really have fun reading it.

Hope there would be more. But don't take it as a pressure pushing for new chapters. Story are suppose to be nourish anyway. *wink*

Cheers

(since i already written a review on chapter 12 it doesn't let me post another review while i had re read it again so yea. post it through chapter 11.)

Human sheld?

I like the story so far and what you have done with the first draft of the idea for the movie. The only real complaint I have is that the chapters are very, very short and could be condensed down to like 2-3 of the current chapters being labeled as a single chapter. I guess it just feels strange in the start when you hit the page down and can already see the review box.

I hope, it's renforcements. I mean for Nick and Judy. If not, it's going to be a brawl.

oh the tension is killing me, where will it go from here ? You better update soon

I love this story so much, I've always wanted to see the dystopian, collar plot played out.

Oh no! Oh no! Oh no! OH NO! What are they gonna do now? I gotta see what happens next! The suspense is KILLING me! Looking forward to more! XD

Curses!

*begins pacing*