| Reviews for Collars |
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Interesting stor chapter 13 . 7/11/2019 You did a good job on the story, keep up the good work! |
poem chapter 12 . 7/11/2019 Your poem is really amazing! |
Love your poem chapter 9 . 7/11/2019 Your poem on chapter 9 is super cute! Thanks for sharing the sweet poem that describes Nick and Judy very well |
Guest chapter 13 . 5/21/2019 cielos que lios |
Guest chapter 13 . 5/28/2018 cielos pobre judi fue duro y nick que listo |
Thou Craggy Knob chapter 13 . 5/28/2018 How have I not come across this until now? Fantastic work, and a great read. This meeting had better go as planned... |
Guest chapter 15 . 4/26/2018 haaaa espero que sea para mejor eso si me gustaba como iba |
Guest chapter 15 . 4/24/2018 Why are you changing the plot? It was fine. |
Wildebunny the Eternal chapter 15 . 4/25/2018 Non-story chapters aren't allowed on this webiste. Please combine this announcement with a chapter that contains a story. |
imjustlikehumphery chapter 13 . 4/22/2018 Great chapter silver, keep it up! Gotta say at the start I honestly didn't think I'd be enjoyin this one as much as I am now but ur writing style is great tellin this side of what Zootopia could have been if they went with the original plot. Anyway glad Nick, Ben and Fin pulled this off cause Judy's in really bad shape. I hope she'll be alright though sooner than later. I just wonder if goin to the ZPD is the right move cause not long ago they were lookin to arrest both Nick and Judy and now Bogo wants to speak with both of them. I just wonder what's gonna be discussed? Can't wait for the next chapter! |
imjustlikehumphery chapter 12 . 4/22/2018 Great chapter silver, keep it up! Now that ur mind is finally clear of ur demons u can plan a way to get Judy back. Funny that what ya replaced the darkness within ur mind with the warm feeling u needed was the image of her. That's why ya need her back. Not only to expose Bellwether but cause ya clearly love Judy. Can't wait for the next chapter! |
imjustlikehumphery chapter 11 . 4/22/2018 Great chapter silver, keep it up! Oh boy this ain't good. What's Nick gonna do now? He knows he loves Judy but what can he do knowin that he'd be walkin into a hornets nest if he went back in there? Can't wait for the next chapter! |
imjustlikehumphery chapter 10 . 4/22/2018 Great chapter silver, keep it up! Dang Fin that was one hell of an escape to get back to Bunnyburrow. Good thing that Judy has Ben on her side though else not sure if her, Nick and Fin would have a safe place to go. Wonder what's next for our trio regardin Bellwether though? Kinda funny for Nick that not long ago he was conning mammals and how he's slowly fallin in love with a bunny. I honestly think Judy's fallin for him as well. Can't wait for the next chapter! |
imjustlikehumphery chapter 8 . 4/22/2018 Great chapter silver, keep it up! Dang to know that this goes back to Bellweather's mom's time is pretty messed up. The reason she used for gettin the collars goin is this disease that went through the predator population of Zootopia at the time. Now that Judy, Nick and Fin have this knowledge they can form a plan but this will be anything but easy as Dawn along with the ZPD will be lookin for both Judy and Nick respectively once they return to the city. Fin does have a good idea though gettin his bud to look at this liquid though. Can't wait for the next chapter! |
imjustlikehumphery chapter 7 . 4/22/2018 Great chapter silver, keep it up! I can tell that both Nick and Judy are really startin to care for each other hence why Judy made the effort to make him a bed after his hellish nightmare. Wonder what her family specifically Bonnie and Stu will think when they find Nick in Judy's room though? Can't wait for the next chapter! |