Nicely done. This does make much more sense than TFA. Hope they can hire you as a screen writer for E8E9.

Thanks for writing such a wonderful story. :)

Awesome fight scene between Ray and Kylo Ren.

Thanks for updating. :)

Great chapter!

Although I love the Force Awakens as I do with the same passion for the other Star Wars films, I'm a big fan of your rewrite.

If there's one thing that I may suggest, if you don't mind, but do you think that when Rey slashes Kylo Ren across his face, it takes of a part of his helmet and reveals a single golden eye beneath it similar to when Ahsoka slashed across Vader's face in Twilight of the Apprentice. Again, it's just a suggestion.

I can't wait to see what happens next.

Keep up the good work!

Did you just kill of Finn?

I knew it this was coming, but it still hurt.

Thanks for updating. :)

I honestly like this version of Force Awakens. They did seem to be a little unoriginal with the plot. Can't wait to see if Han survives or not!

I'm starting to feel scared for Han now.

Thanks for updating. :)

Love it so far! Love the added interactions w Poe and Rey, and can't wait for what you have in store for Finn and Rey's.

SHould have killed Nines, stupid not to it was an inevitable outcome or should have been.

youre the jar jar binks of this website

Thanks for updating. :)

This is really excellent! I always read your updates!

What a truly brilliant story you are writing!

Looks like Ren had the smart ball, but it still wasn't enough to stop Rey from escaping.

Can't wait for her to run into Poe, Finn, Han and Chewie.

Thanks for updating. :)

Excellent work! I love the slight modifications you are doing to the story of TFA (even though I enjoyed the movie very much) keep up the great work.

Let me know what you think of my AU of A New Hope