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I'm so glad you updated. I actually reread your previous chapters before reading your latest chapter for a refresher on everything. It's a good thing I did too since I realized Tamsin is actually supposed to be a character from "Lost Girl". I assumed she was supposed to be an original character. I'm really disappointed she actually isn't and shocked I didn't figure it out sooner. Then again I've never actually seen "Lost Girl", though it has been on my list of shows that I should watch for a long while now. I figured it out when you mentioned the name Bo and I thought to myself "how many possible shows or movies could actually have a character named Bo?" Answer probably not very many, so I connected the dots knowing that the main character on "Lost Girl" is named Bo too. I'm such a moron for not figuring it out sooner, you really should've told us that. Not everyone's a fan of the show or in my case has even seen the show to know that. That aside, about this chapter...I would expect Amy to be rebellious and tell Farrah that she couldn't care less about going to a church. Especially given Amy's characterization on the show, I highly doubt Farrah could ever get Amy to wake up early for church let alone actually step into a church. Knowing Amy she would legit tell Farrah to literally "shove it". That does explain her absence the following day after fucking Karma though. Damn, I didn't expect Tamsin to go psycho like she did in this chapter. I look forward to your next chapter and I really hope you update NFL as well when you have time. I like both stories as I've already stated and you already know.

THIS SHIT IS GOOD! Where's the rest? Add it asap. You're like one of my fav authors now

I love this story omg

Please continue! Love it!

Finish it... Please

The story is rather bland. You started off okay then it has just gone down hill. The long periods between updates for a drawn out piece is what makes this fall short. Excuses only get you so far. Better give up while you're behind.

I wasn't expecting a shout out, thanks. I actually liked the juxtaposition and differences between Amy's view point and Karma's view point. You're right there are two sides to every story, so of course Karma is going to see things differently. I wonder what happened to Amy. If she left because she still thinks Karma's just using her again. It would be insane if she did leave and go straight to Tamsin's place. That's okay that this isn't going to have a Tamy ending, but I do really like her character. I hope you don't get rid of her character even if this isn't a Tamy story.

P.S. I really like the couple of different songs that you've mentioned. I liked "Superficial Love" that you mentioned in the last chapter and I liked "Underdressed" in this chapter. When you mentioned Twilight in here were you talking about the movie or is that supposed to be another song? If it's a song, who is it by?

Wow!Back soon pls

Damn, if Karma is serious I wonder what Amy is going to say to Tamsin. She's going to have to tell her the truth since Tamsin already knows most of the story about Amy and Karma's tumultuous relationship. I really wanted Amy and Tamsin to be together, but it sounds like Karma was being sincere about her own feelings towards Amy. I look forward to the next chapter.

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Ok I knew it. Love this, it's like faking it and lost girl at the same time! Keep it up! :)

Great so far! And just curious but did you get the name Tamsin from lost girl? I'm obsessed with that show