Holy wow. I’m reading this in 2018! And I have to say this is probably one of the most well thought out plots and well written stories I have ever seen. It was so detailed and although it could be a little confusing, you did your best to explain and it really did help! I just wanted to post a review all these years later hoping you’ll see it and realize what an awesome job you did on this story.

Your work is NOT forgotten!

Thank you for the amazing read, I can honestly say it was one of the best I’ve ever read.

Lame. No one remebers anything at the end? We're back to square one? Then what was the point of the fic?

Before I go off into a tangent of sorts (a short tangent), I'd just like to point out 2 things; one, I don't review stories as often as I probably should, and two, I read this in 1 day, just because I'm that nerdy. XD

Having said that, this story is BY FAR one of, if not THE, best pure Yu-Gi-Oh fan fiction I've ever read. I've recommended it to my best friend, describing it to her as a fanfic that's "confusing 90% of the time, yet so awesome that you won't care". And what the heck! You were 14/15 when you wrote this? Bravo! You should consider writing as a profession. You would kill all competition, no doubt. The way you write...it just paints amazingly vivid pictures in the mind's eye! That's a gift. :)

Okay, I've ranted long enough. Again, this was a complete joy to read. Thank you so much for sharing it with us. _

~Snowy

This story was complicated, unusual, confusing, and all-and-all a AMAZING story. This is a one of a kind story. Well done.

O_O It certainly has been surreal.

Amazing and disturbing and fascinating and downright scary.

Great fic. :D

Amazing story. I loved it and appreciated all the work that you put into it. Great job _

hey i read this on my psp even though it gave me a splitting head but it was still good the plot was magnifesent. you are a good writer.

OH MAN! HE SUSPENSE IS KILLING ME!

COOL STORY _

oh. my. god.

that's about it, really.

i've been procrastinating my homework for days so that i can spend every available second reading this.

absolutely amazing, and damn creepy in places too.

Yami Yugi is my favourite character - his hair, his voice, his entire personality - so i really ejoyed it.

you should feel really good about this one.

WOW! That was really weird! Great story though! Glad you wrote it! Nicely done!

Nice...Very nice..Very twisted. And long! You have a lovely writing style and an impressive vocabulary. I can see much work went into this. Good job, I am very interested to see how this is going to end! _!

Chaos: Well, I've finally decided to actually review this story. Firstly, because it seems like a good time to admit to the world that - Shock! Horror! - I actually do review YGO stories, and secondly because I just love this story so much...despite it being very much confusing. In fact, the only reason I delayed so long was that it's on, if I read correctly, 100 reviews. And that seems such a nice round number. *sob, cry, thump computer*

Flower: Anyway, back to the STORY. I was a bit confused over the actual purpose of Yami Ni, unless it was only to teach Yami how to use the Shadows. (?) Apart from that, I can't actually think of many words that would describe this story aptly enough...and I consider my vocabulary to be getting quite large now. Feel complimented! Or something. Also, sadly, I have to admit to being one of those people who uses 'aibou' and 'hikari' if only because they sound so cute. And believe you me, I WOULD use kawaii and the like in a normal conversation, if it didn't freak out my friends as much as it apparently freaks out you. *sigh*

Chaos: And after all the good feelings I get from this story, I also feel ashamed. Because it only has 100...101, now...reviews, whereas my latest has 132, or thereabouts, and going strong. It doesn't seem right, as all I've being doing is slogging off puny stories to get fans so I can get more reviews which, for some reason, I seem to crave. Ick. Well, anyway...review campaign! I'll just be putting this on my favourites page so that everyone can see it there. I do admit that I stared at it for about a month on Amarielle's page - no, not constantly. *sweatdrop* - before eventually deciding to read this. And now I really wish I'd read it earlier - though I had gained my weak knowledge of the first series to know who Miho (name?) is.

Flower: M...purple hair...

Chaos: Yes. Anyway, I guess the whole point of this getting-overly-long review is to say that I love your story, it's brilliant, update more often, I want a sequel, random comment, please come look at my stories! Or that's what reviews seem to be like sometimes. Or maybe that's unfair. Ah, so what. I'm a prejudiced person.

Flower: This review is too long; if I don't watch it, I'll end up plugging my stories (I feel appropriately ashamed and pathetically hopeful) as I have before...so...goodbye! And may I read another of your stories, if I remember. Yes... I'd better bookmark this page...

Chaos Flower

wow. i liked this. iss so long! but its still good _

No, I am not a member of but as a reader I feel it my duty to review. I actually put off finishing this story for a while but I'm definitely glad I finally finished it. The beginning was fantastic, a foreshadow of the events to follow, the middle was suspenseful and heartbreaking, with never a moment's rest, and the conclusion was bitter and yet relieving, taking off all the stress with a resolution worth all the tears that I shed reading this fic. So now, Animagess I type before you, wishing nothing more than to give you a standing ovation for a novel well done and another reader satisfied.
Yours Truly,
BlueWolf